This is wonderful! I wish there was more

nice very cool more!

Charming

Awesome writing and plot, love this fic (_)

Raven

One of my favorites!

oh..that was so cute man...thanks~fangirl98

Nice! Very nice!

Nice one shot, a story line I hadn't read before.

where did miroku and inuyasha come from?

Awesome work! I loved it! :)

I enjoyed reading this story even though it was a bit rushed for Sesshoumaru's part. :D

Very well written. I notice that compared to your eariler stories that you have refine your written tacnique a bit, and I mean that is the best way possible. Your chapter stories lose a bit of consistence with how the personalities are written the farther you go into the story sometimes. This would of made a very interesting longer story, but like all of peoples' reviews, they are just personal opinions :) This was a fabuslous short story.

Keep up the good work :D

Evi

ps. Btw, did you use 'trundled' right? I looked it up for the defined definition, and mostly it says "to move with a cicular objert, like a cart." Tho one entry stated "to move with a rolling gait" but that seems to pretain to horses and dogs. Just thought I would say something. xD

lols

That was so cute! I loved it. I love how he got the loophole. Lol. Keep writing awesome things!

So cute! And really well written :D