Ahh, loved this. Such a good portrayal of Bellatrix' human side. I wonder when she'll ever see it's enough.

Aww. Poor Bella. I loved the little touches - the too-loud voice, the hesitation - which give her away. And her attempt to convince them both that killing Ted clears Meda's name. *sigh*

Nice work! :)

ohhh I loved it.

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i love it :)

Aww, I like the idea that Bellatrix wouldn't want to kill Andromeda. And I'd like to think it's true. I like the "uncertainty in her voice." Great idea for the prompt!

I love this!

I like how Voldemort likes to tease her as if to remind Bellatrix of how her sister has betrayed the Black family by running off with a muggle.

I love how Voldemort is reminding Bellatrix that just because Ted has been killed by her that doesn't mean that her sister is suddenly forgiven.

You also show a very clear indication that Bellatrix and Andromeda were close when they were younger, but in a way Bellatrix is hoping that Andromeda suddenly realises her faults and goes back to believing in the pureblood values. I also get a sense that Voldemort knows this and he may want her to admit it?

This was really well thought out and written.

Fantastic work!

-Sarah x

I'm not sure I get the ending on this one...

oooh i like it. It makes you wonder if she really going to do it. i like it great job