I watched the video XnerjaveikaX made according this story...that's intense...really...I think my nose is going to bleed...

The story is one of the best Wincest story I have ever read. And the fact that nerjaveika had done a mini-serial out of it is just wonderful, seeing that I would have never ever read it if it weren't for her. However the translation is incredible poor. I'm really sorry to say that but it sounds like it's out of an English translation programme. And we all know how "good" said programmes are. Everyone can understand the meaning, that is for sure but many people probably don't even spare a second glance at the fic when they see the grammar. And that is terrible because, like I said before, this is something I recomend whole-heartedly. So, if you are okay with it of course, I wish to correct it. If you want I can even send it to you so you can replace it. Well, I will wait for your response and, after all, thank you for posting the fiction here so we all can enjoy it.