Aw, I found this cute! So sad, in the beginning. But I love it, and I especially love how the chapters name spelled out that. So cute!

~Midnight Hell

aww! This is so adorable and it's a really cool idea!

I love it and I can't wait for thenext update :)!

This is an interesting, and adorable idea. I feel really sorry for Roxas and Namine in some of the chapters :)

Aww!

great chapter! she finally forgave him! yeah! ROKUNAMI TIME!

ZOMG! Its over! OH NOZ! I miss it already! *Favorites* Now I can find it :P. :P to the people who can't favorite :P

great ending! and i just realized that your chapter titles make a sentence... wow, i'm slow. but it's really creative! this story was just so simple. it didn't make you think too hard, but it gave off a lot of emotion. like you couldn't wait for her to forgive him and once it happened you had a mini party in your head. or at least i did. haha. good job, kiddo :)

~SorasKey

An overall cute story :) Great job

I really like this story and the concept behind it. its beautiful work and i'm impressed! :D but my absolute favorite part, would be that the chapters make a sentence! very clever! :D i'm inspired to write now... something i haven't done in a very very long time! awesome stuff

yay namine.. and it only took axel for her to take some action. i just hope it's roxas' house she's going to :)

~SorasKey

Wow i really love how this story is turning out!, I hope namine finds it in her heart to forgive roxas, i mean you can tell he really cares for her.

Yaay :) she's finally going to go talk to her devastated boyfriend thingie. o: I can't wait to read about that.

Shes Going.!

Oh my :O This should be good lol (:

Oh-Oh.