Ah that was too funny! I want some more short stories from you, and I really do enjoy them. Please continue writing!

Lol, I love the end...

Copying my comment over from LJ. And yes, I still say that Vanitas is the best damn part of this one. Freakin' hilarious!

Goddd, these just get better and better. Poor Terra, that is all I have to say. In the first one, he got off easily... the rest of these make me lol at how bad/pathetic things just seem to happen to him all over the place. Well, if you consider the real game... I guess that makes sense, doesn't it? He really does get the short end of the stick.

I want a picture of picture of Terra in that little apron now... (creepy giggle)

Aqua's caffeine addiction is hilarious too. As usual, the ending is so funny-I can seriously see her leaning over the counter and saying that. Ha ha, since she loves coffee, does she also love the way Terra smells like coffee? Is he trying to get rid of the smell for himself, or does he think he won't be able to date Aqua if he smells like a walking espresso machine? XD I would love it if Terra did all those crazy things to get rid of the smell and then she was just like "Aw, where'd the coffee bean smell go?" (dies)

I love how Terra loves the register. I can just see him like hugging and being all "You and me, buddy. You and me."

But of course, it's Vanitas that steals the show here. I love how much of a douche he is! It's so perfect; you totally got him spot on too. (Man, for some reason, you're really good at the boys this time around. I'm lovin' it. :D) His scooter... (dies) I can totally see Aqua just destroying it and then coming back in and smiling... Skim milk and fat-free... XD

It's so perfect. I love it; I love you for all this~~!

ok so i got this game... a little diffrent from your stories but i think your stories are more cute. so write more if you can...

My comment from LJ:

OMGOSH, THESE GET CUTER AND CUTER! I just love your Terra, he's the damn cutest thing ever. 3 3 Hahah, poor Ven under the docks... He's the smarter voice of Terra's conscience.

Ha ha, I also had this vision of Aqua hearing other girls talking about Terra and thinking to herself, "Ooh, I will CUT you!" The true reason she became a Keyblade master... to protect Terra and Ven from fangirls! XD

Terra... listen honey, you should always just go to girls for advice. Ven is connected with Sora... you're not getting a single bright idea out of him. XD

Write moar, even moarr!

You're the awesomest ever.

Terra? a pyromaniac? i thought that was Axel's job!

anyway, interesting to know Aqua's side of the story. and the end was cute, even if Ven played a goofy part in it. heh heh.

haha this whole story is so cute! I love TerraXAqua. Good job! Can't wait for an update :]

Hahahahaa! Ibdon't know who to feel worst for! Terra for his failing attempts. Aqua for being soo incredibly naive. Or Ventus with his...'interesting' ideas. xD lol

Once again, another sucessful chapter! :D

Again, my comment from LJ:

Oh god, these just get better and better! I love this one even more than the last one-your Ven is so perfect! I could literally see him saying and doing everything you included in this fic.

And your Terra is just... Ahahaha I feel so bad for him! I pretty much rofl'd at the part about him being exceptionally hygienic. XD Keep at it Terra, she'll get it eventually! 3 I like the diagrams idea. He can have a lovely little progression: "And this is us holding hands, and this is us getting married, and these are our grandkids-"

And, as always, that endddd. I just about died. So freakin' funny. I seriously want this to be animated as part of the game now.

So much love.

poor Terra... trying to get the girl he likes to go out with him and it ends badly each time...

don't take this the wrong way... but the best part. and that's only because it was so funny that Ven got pushed in the water.

and serenading... doesn't seem like Terra's thing.

can't wait to read some more!

This is cute. Normally i dont review, but since there isnt that much TerraAqua fics, i hope you write more.

Awww, that was really heartwarming...and cute! x3

Haha, great story! It's nice to see that Terra actually pass the exam. Very nice. ]

well done. I enjoyed it.

cute start. i liked it and can't wait to read more! :)

I'm just going to copy over what I wrote on LJ, because I think that best expresses my love...

OMG, I LOVE IT SO MUCH I'M USING ALL CAPS!

Thank you so much for this~! There is no good Terra/Aqua fanfics in this world, and you finally created one. I demand that you post it everywhere and spread the awesomeness that is this fic to the four corners of the universe.

I love the way you wrote Aqua especially-she's sweet and feminine but also totally kick ass. The pulling on Terra's hair was loltastic. (And tsk tsk, Terra, hitting a lady! ...But he totally would hit girls, and then be like "What? Is it better if I treat her like she's made of glass?" XD)

Even though Aqua ends up being the master in canon, the ending of this was just too freakin' perfect. I imagine Aqua being like "OMGWHAT?" after he kissed her. Super blush~! Now I really wish this was how the actual game went. (Ha ha, and all the masters in the background giggling like dirty old men while watching, lol)

I also loved the quiet sort of relationship they had, just enjoying life. So damn cute.

Ahahah, but now I just want more. This is like being allowed to eat only one Krispy Kreme out of a dozen box. XD Torture.

ILU, forever.

Also, I'm glad the formatting came out okay! Cute little stars!

Moarnao beetoch. 3