Aw, that's so sweet.

This is so sweet. You write little kid perspective well.

Magnificently in character. :3 First IC 1st person Goten fic I've probably seen.

Heart has melted with Chibiness and Innocence. Particularly about the flypaper.

I really liked this story. Nice serious look into Goten's psyche.

Nice. Like the way you captivated Goten's innocent way of thinking.

Wow.

Well, this bought a HUGE smile to my face!

It's just so... right! For Goten's character! I love the way he goes off on tangents, like flypaper, and refers to himself, Gohan and Trunks as 'halfway' alien.

When he says all this at the end to Chi-Chi really makes this fic for me, and her eyes go all shiny... who WOULDN'T want to scoop Goten up?

I also love how the different way she treats Gohan and Goten as she raises them comes across strongly here.

Anyway, awesome, awesome fic. So well written, too. It actually sounds like Goten is talking.

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OMG that was just too adorable! Thank you for writing this! Really, I LOVED it!

Awe, you captured Goten's character perfectly. This was just so sweet and sad and witty and adorable and yet awesome at the same time. xDDD

I absolutely love this! Wonderfully written and absolutely beautiful! The way your captured Goten's child-like perspective is completely spot on! Great job!