Ugggg. Writing bad. Bad Drama. Too fast. Forced emotions.

I considered giving this up due to the bad grammar and cringe-worthy beginning. But 2ed chapter lets go!

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just a quick comment: Souji's a guest of the Velvet Room as well. When he met Minato, he would have established a Social Link with Minato, correct? If so, what Social Link does Minato have? Other than that... Amazing story! I love it so much

Excellent story! You should consider to continue this story to the end.

nice keep going

I really hope you continue this is a very good story!

Haha I like how ryoji seems like a detective. I like the chapters so far, they are great and I wish to see more of Naoto looking for answers. This Naoto and Minato arc seems fun

summoning your persona Suicide

Nice story, you might have to get a beta-reader though.

I really hope to see more of this story, its wonderful, ive been looking for a story alot like this XD i hope you continue

Really hoping for a new chapter soon. Can't wait for more

Storyline is moving at a comfortable pace. It seems to be a bit rushed occasionally, but nothing too bad. You've been adding more details in the recent chapter, which is always good. Looking forward to when they hit September and the field trip!

Shikaku Zetsumei

omg...Is naoto going to be Minato's little sis? That'd be pretty funny hahahaha

Story too awesome!

MANGASME!

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