You… I… Oh…

I approve!

It was beautiful thank you

Hold on hold on WHAT!

*Looks at the summary. Reads the last sentence. Facepalms.*

not yaoi?...then what the hell is it?pretty much sure many have abandoned after 5th chapter

Please rewrite this story I really liked it a lot.

Don’t even think about continuing this shit. Pure fucking garbage from an equally shitty author. Do us all a favor and delete your account.

GGGGAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

I tell you author, I got like, 5 heart attacks when Itachi smirked.

I didn't know he could show emotion

.-.

KEEP IT GOIN! (ﾉヮ)ﾉ*:･ﾟ ﾟ･: *ヽ(ヮヽ)

I’m done.

I quit.

Too much yaoi.

NARUTO WASNT EVEN GAY IN CANON DAMMIT BUT NOOOOOO EVERYONE IN THE FANDOM FREAKING GOES ON ABOUT HOW GAY HE IS AND OH MY GAWD I JUST WANT ONE FANFIC WHERE ROMANCE ISNT DIRECTLY INCLUDED

Please, just kill yourself. There's nothing redeemable about this filth.

Just wanted to say that the fact that you made an extremely lowkey slash pairing was awesome. I'd have liked a bit more evidence that they were together but i like that you didn't focus on the pairing too much. I love lowkeys because no homophobia or overreaction takes place and makes the fact that they're together seem natural or acceptable.

Also, while yaoi does always pertain to sex and romance between two boys/men, it is still a bit misleading because it is assumed that the fic has absolutely no boy/boy pairings at all. I suggest saying lowkey slash/gay pairing. Thanks for writing this!

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming