so… is this technically an insert fanfiction considering your name?

Great

This is so beautifully written, you wrote out their personalities well and gah! Did I mention the writing? Yeah I did

I also love how you included the rest of the trainers (You had me at Brendan getting his ass kicked at mario kart xD)

I would favorite this story, but I have no account

I want to read this over and over

And this is coming from a hardcore BurningLeafShipper and FolkloreShipper, mind you

Nice:) I love LyraXRed shipping.

Ashley...Katchadourian. You were supposed to be watching the door. You...were supposed to be watching the door. You were supposed...TO BE WATCHING THE DOOR. ASHLEY KATCHADOURIAN! Do you know what these are, Ashley Katchadourian!? These are a little girl's arms! A little girl with dreams...with legs...with a head! She's a pencil! She's a swizzlestick! You couldn't use her as a pool noodle! And now I'm holding up her arms! Her arms! I'm holding them because you weren't watching the door! A girl lost her arms, Ashley Katchadourian! A girl lost her ****ing arms! Do you not know what has transpired while you were in Pearl Harbour?! We had our own Pearl Harbor here today! Oh my God! And me...I'm Ben Affleck! And I'm Ben Affleck and I'm holding two ****ing girl's arms! And you're Cuba Gooding, Jr. disappointing everybody! L

Gameverse RedxLyra :)

The tone of this story was so secretive, I liked it a lot.
This is really good :)

Strong beginning, strong finish. Entertaining read. It never really lags anywhere. It's a very good one shot story. The conversations feel fluid and true to the characters.

The complicated relationship between some of the trainers was well emphasized but never took hold of the storys' actual center.

A motion you capture perfectly as the players exit the stage, so to speak.

I loved it. If I had to grade this, I'd give it a well deserved 9/10.

WTF HAPPEN …:-/

x3 I adore the last line, excellently said! In fact, the story itself is excellent. Great job!

wow i really loved it u should make another fanfic about this couple ? if u could tat would be cool !

it is really good u should make more :)

I came for the Red/Lyra (which I have absolutely fallen in love with recently) and stayed for the beautiful writing. Great story.

Amazing story. I was enthralled throughout. You captured what I always imagined Red's personality to be, perfectly. Hope you do more Pokemon related stuff.

Love it. Please make more story of Red and Lyra. I favorite this story.