| Reviews for The Happiness Contract |
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Dan Brown chapter 4 . 4/4 I am totally loving this book! Great job on it! |
Marc the Unruly chapter 4 . 3/5 Good Chapter! |
G the Headmaster chapter 6 . 1/31 Really cute piece of fluff,just as advertised! |
Gina chapter 4 . 1/30 totally worth it! |
PGHammer chapter 1 . 1/24 First off, Hygeia - Between her AND the ambrosia, anything that was physiologically broke on Harry has been fully repaired (from bones to eyes) - which is why Hermione noted that he seemed to be growing. He WAS growing; remember, anything that was physiologically broke - that includes malnourishment and malnutrition, and the side effects of both. Lady Padma Gryffindor - throwing a wobbler into assumptions would certainly fit Padma. Lady Daphne Gryffindor and Lady Hermione Slytherin - Spanners; not mere wobblers. Saunas/steam baths/etc. - My first experience with all of them was at George Washington University - specifically the Smith Center. Any four-year college or university with an athletic department will have all of them; so do most high-end hotels and resorts. (If you are wondering what resort fees are for, these facilities are part of it. Oddly enough, I have never USED them at NewYorkNewYork Las Vegas - despite staying there twice. I seriously need to correct that error (on my part). Yes - MY error.) |
babiluv22 chapter 6 . 12/19/2019 Sweet loved it |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/12/2019 At least Luna has the decency to call Neville out on his own bullshit. LMAO the prick thought to blame Harry for what Neville's betrothed wore? As if Harry controlled what she wore. Then again that is true to Neville's character. When he needs confidence or bravery, he leeches it from Harry. Particularly when he's looking for the opportunity to look brave or better, e piggybacks of it from Harry. When Harry was bullied or ostracized in Second and Fourth Year, where was Neville? And now, when his own insecurities, shortcoming, or shyness pops up, he blames Harry. |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/12/2019 Lets list some evidence of your own bullshit: -Hermione wanting to banish Harry to the couch because he found the "first among equals" bit unimportant. She's not entitled to every fucking thing or opinion he has, just as he isn't entitled to her's, either. They don't own or control each other. They are equal. But if it were up to you, men would be subservient to the whims of women, huh? Then there's her thinking that it's his house doesn't mean anything. Uh, yes, it does actually. He deserves respect, and the right to sleep in his own bed. Especially when he did nothing wrong. Harry forgot about the "first among equals" because he thinks all of his wives are equal, and he loves them all equally. Was that wrong enough for him to be kicked out of bed like some dog? Oh, and Hermione's reason for not kicking Harry out of his own bed? Is because she doesn't want the other wives to sleep with him. Awfully selfish of her. It's not because of hurting his feelings, or it being a disrespect to him. no, it's his value as a sexual object that she doesn't want to share. Reverse the genders, and you'd cry sexism. When my wife does something that makes me upset, I don't kick her out of bed. I talk about it, explain my feeling sand her reasonings and feelings, and hopefully come to a mutual understanding or compromise. You know, like adults who are equal and are a team. Here's something to chew. If a guy lives in a woman's house, can he banish her from her own bed? No. So why isn't it the same with the opposite gender? -In this chapter, you blame Morgana being labelled a dark witch is due to "modern male bias". Right, so according to you, a Dark witch is dark due to male academia. Despite that fact was discovered and taught by women. Shit, I guess there were no female researchers or record keepers. Yet Rowena and Helga were recorded and known as great. Why didn't "modern male bias" discredit them or label them as "Dark witches"? Oh, this is despite the fact that there way more Dark wizards than witches. But oh no, when there's one Dark infamous witch, it's false due to "modern male bias". You subtlety inject your own bias against males in your stories. Little things here and there. By blaming men, or making men seem inept or stupid or worse than women, you are basically coddling women. You make it seem like women must be treated special, like something fragile, easily damaged like a child. It's why many asshole men out there don't take women seriously. If the only way a women can look better is if men look worse, then that means women need a handicap. Many men find that shit hilarious. If women act like Hermione, where she thinks she can kick a man out of his own bed in his own house for her own perceived slight that she thinks he committed, rather than sit down and talk it out like a mature adult, than of course men wouldn't take such women seriously. I know I wouldn't. Didn't Harry originally say at the beginning, that it you feel something, don't sulk, take it out. Same rule applies. If you feel something, don't kick me out of my own fucking bed like I'm some disobedient dog, talk it out. Guess Hermione and you forgot that, huh? |
Sparrow White chapter 6 . 9/11/2019 First off, ignore the previous "Guest" reviewer. You have neither done nor said anything to warrant such a rude and harsh response. Second, I enjoyed this happy little story. The use of Merlin and Galadriel was interesting, as were the portal discussions. I felt that you kept Hermione more in character than some other harem stories that I have seen. And sometimes I just want a tale with no angst at all. However, I must echo another reviewer and get after you a bit for your use of apostrophes to make plurals. A few other authors on this site also have this problem. It should be "stories," "heirs," "Malfoys," "Wednesdays" et cetera without an apostrophe in sight. Still, I'm glad you wrote this. If you keep writing "happy Harry" stories, I shall keep reading them. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17/2019 Fuck you. |
Hardy chapter 6 . 7/4/2019 I know that this is rather late but l just started reading these fanfic And this one I loved I just wished that we could’ve seen the villains reactions to who they are faceing In any case I thank you |
BoredKing chapter 6 . 5/26/2019 There were a couple of contradictions in the first few chapters and lots of repetition but it was a nice story. I like this Harry, he isn't a submissive little shite, pardon my French, like most stories with a harem or any sort of romantic relationship. Hermoine seemed to share the spotlight, so to speak, nothing wrong with it though. |
Hardy chapter 6 . 4/6/2019 I enjoyed it very much The only one I have come across without any cliffhangers And I really enjoyed that My only problem is the ones that faced Zeus What happened |
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 6 . 4/6/2018 Enjoyable story quite different enjoy reading it Thank you for sharing |
hugo.buentellojr chapter 1 . 2/20/2018 WELL DIABETES BE DAMMEND |