Not bad. There were definitely quite a few grammar mistakes though. And the plot doesn't make sense at some points. For example why was Chuck gone for five years? It kind of made sense to run at first so he could regroup and stuff but staying away for five years doesn't make any sense.

Also the exchanges between Chuck and Sarah after Chuck gets Sarah out are weird. It's almost like Sarah is bipolar. One sentence she says they can work it out and the very next she says it's over.

So while still entertaining to read there are definitely some errors in both the plot and the writting.

I don't think I have ever read such a dark fan fic before. In a way it is so morbidly fascinating like witnessing a real live tragedy. I am not quite sure how I actually feel about it but part of me wants you to continue just to see what happens and how you conclude it.

Do you even like the show ?

As I am telling a lot of authors, I am trying to catch up w/ reading and reviews im almost a year behind, and I have a lot of saved reading material. I came across this update and wanted to just send a little something your way. This once again reinforced my hate for shaw, you seem to make sure the audience hates him. I hate that shaw got sarah, but I was glad that morgan helped chuck to escape! Curious as to if you plan on updating this at all since its been since January? I have it to alert me so if you do I cant wait.

nice job

Wow that was jacked up! This reinforced my hate for shaw, and it was nice to see sarah and chuck working as a team again! I can't wait till shaw gets what's coming to him!

yes. sorry for some reason i havent been getting the email for the new chapter... :(

hi,

its nice to see you haven't given up on this story. I hope to see more soon.

Bcat

hi there! I'm a huge fan of Chuck and I've started reading his stories here in FF and found yours! I loved it right away and just wanted to let you know that I'll be here reading! See you soon! bye

PS: sorry for any grammatical or spelling mistakes, I'm a translatorship student but not a native speaker so please forgive me if any! now again, see you! :D

Great twist with the Project Tombstone. Shaw has become a ruthless killer now. I'm looking forward to Chuck and Sarah getting over the pain of leaving each other and get back together to team up and kill Shaw slowly and painfully.

I love the story, all though it is a bit lemony. I think if you want more reviews and readers that you should write a new summary, because the one you have now doesn't really do your story justice - it's a bit hard to understand what the story is about from what you've written. Other than that I'm excited to see what happens when chuck and Sarah reunites with Casey.

Please Continue..

Please Continue

It would be a shame for you to discontinue this. While I have not been reviewing, I have certainly enjoyed this story of yours and would really like to see it finished. However, I will respect whatever decision you make regarding this fic.

I think you should continue it. It is interesting so far.