Mmmmm... Did you ever consider writing original work? Your writing is addictive :)

I always loved this fic :)

Best Arthur/Ariadne fic on all of (I've browsed them all) hands down.

I love that you don't write Ariadne as a weepy damsel in distress, or Arthur as a robotic hero with a ridiculously tortured past. I've read waaaaay too many of those.

You kept them in character and the interaction between characters was realistic and belivable. Plus the sex scenes were beyond hot, def a plus.

Really great work, thank you. :)

Ahhh the awesomeness! It's burning my eyes! Lol jk but not about the awesomeness part fell hard for this story hope to read all your others soon!

absolutely loved this... beginning to end... in character, lovely dialog, excellent plot, and completely cohesive... thanks for the ride :O)

-would be thrilled to find out you've asked yourself, "but what if A&A got together another way?"- and put your answer to type... pretty please?

Ohh I love, love, love this! Arthur and Ariadne are adorable, you've written their relationship perfectly :D Wonderful job!

I would so love a sequel to this story. I enjoyed it so much.

A sequel? What? w

EeeeeEEEeeeee! /jumps excitedly up and down, clapping

Bravo! I loved this so very much. I would love a sequel, heh heh ;D In fact, I'm heading off to your profile to devour the rest of your stories now ~~

This chapter was particularly cool how you mixed action and Arthur's thoughts. And I appreciate that you were consistent in POV. And the plot behind it (stealing a recipe) is so... Inception-y I had no prob buying into it.

Eames was cool at the end too, that little mini monologue of his.

Seriously, this deserves so much more praise. The writing is impeccable-usually I race through fics, but this one I forced myself to slow and appreciate the beauty in how you constructed every sentence, and enjoy the emotional responses (gringrin). It's awesome how you managed to keep it innocent and kinky (I feel like a perv using this word...) at the same time, which characterizes Ariadne extremely well.

Arthur's characterization was... eh. Some parts were a little iffy, but overall very well rounded and in sync with the movie. I don't think he would be the type to straightforwardly say... "I like you". idk-it seems, juvenile? I know you had him admit his feelings to Ariadne early on so the plot could progress. I'm not sure if he would ever say so, but show other ways he cares for her?

HA! The food fight. That was awesome. I also adored that epiphany when Arthur (in another chap, forgot which one) was feeding the ducks. The way you described the progression of his feelings for Ariadne, his fear/insecurities... in so few words. Truly admirable. You have so much control over your characters, over your writing :)

I need to stop babbling. Overall, I enjoyed this sooo much! Thank you for taking the time to write this. Fantastic work!

ASDF! I love this dialogue. So sharp and witty. I love how Eames is so open about sex... fwhahaha.

"You must self-medicate a lot..." Nice one ;D

This is sooo adorable :o)

I cannot stop sighing over this. *_* So beautiful the way you wrote it!

LMAO the first scene. X'D

Man, I don't know how you do it. Convey so much in such few words. I love the way to describe things ~ yum. :3 I mean, something so simple a phrase "...leaning over to trail her fingers in the water" evokes such a sensual response from the reader.

You must teach me! /falls to knees

I love Ariadne's curiosity about you know... sex in a dream. (giggle) The way she asked it was reminiscent of the movie all over again, and how she retains that girlish innocence even still in this chapter. Fantastic job! *s

I adore your writing style! It's very succinct but yet enough to paint a clear picture of what's going on... I appreciate you not dragging out the prose with unnecessary descriptions/words. The dialogue is very sharp and engaging as well.

Lovely story :3 *skips off to next chapter*

very hot hot story! thank you!

I loved it! Great job! :)