England must be a deluded idiot. God! With all those foul things he says, he really thinks he has perfect manners and he is a gentleman?! God! That's one delusional moron! He's so rude and is more of a punk than a gentleman.

Oh. OH. I'm more of a USUK and FrUS/USFr shipper myself, but oh. This was absolutely, wonderfully written.

I don't read much FrUK, but this is absolutely wonderful. I love how perceptive America is, and how nice America and Canada are to each other. And, if I do say so myself, this is probably one of my most favorite portrayals of France.

Absolutely breathtaking, I loved reading this.

Wow. This story was amazing. Like, everything of it. (Especially the smut... But I'm a perv :3)
That twist though. I didn't see that coming ! x)

Oh... You're bilingual ? Really ? So you made all the translations yourself ? Well things are good and things are not. Like a fifty-fifty. :3
I mean, I KNOW what I'm talking about. I AM bilingual myself. But native french :3 (I promise my accent is pretty good. I hope.)

Well, you still did a good job ! So yeah ! :3

Well this confused me at the beginning, the took me by utter surprise because how things were going and the summary I forgot it was a France/England and my mind only registered UsUk haha.
But anyways, this is so incredibly well written and lovely! Beginning with the structure, which is wonderful and down to the incredible way you can describe and write details to create a wonderful mental image and still manage not to make it too packed, and the way you made the plot was just wonderful because of how you managed to include so many things, their thoughts, their conflicts, their history, the turn of events, the cascade of emotions and feelings, everything was put together is a way that it didn't lost any coherence and it didn't feel like it was too much. This is a work of art.

I really liked this fanfiction! Wonderful use of the French phrases (I'm only in my first year of it in high school, myself), and I really enjoyed the fact that you included England's inner conflict, without letting it take over the whole story. It also helps that these are my two favorite pairings ;3
Definitely favoriting, and I'll be sure to visit your page

Ahhhhh this was amazing. ;; I adored their sudden shift from arguing to making out, haha. and the sex itself was both sexy and heart-touching \o/ I loved reading this.

Loved this, so cute :3

Oh my god, I love this! FrUK USCan an amazing vocabulary a good story a lot of French words \o/ something reaching Prussia's level of awesomeness D!

Oh my gosh this so much.

Seriously, my dear. It is fantastic and wonderful and amazingly sexy yet sweet. And it makes my heart melt for these two. You did such a fantastic job 3

Ah! That was so sweet! 3333 tres bien!

This story made me laugh, especially with all the 'roastbeef' comments. Not sure where that came from but I'm awfully tempted to post one of those on my friend's facebook wall (she's british). I was kind of iffy about reading this- I dont like USxUK- but I am happy that I did. It was one of the better stories I have read recently, meaning one of the few I read to the end :)

This is beautiful :)

Hope you write more Hetalia fic in the future (your FrUK is spot on, I'd love to see you write more pairings *cough Sweden/Finland cough*) (and Kusoshitsuji if you ever get around to it; Grell needs more love)

Loved it :D hope to see more soon

-yepoleg

...This.

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...The ability to write a breathtaking sex scene within a wonderfully dramatic story, which has actual /plot/ as well as the occasional dash of history or of humor... I do believe you've just written a perfect FrUK fic. Certainly the best I can remember reading.

I lovelovelove how you wrote their joint denial of the possibility that they're in love with each other, even in the face of all their history and their /feelings/. I love that Arthur still went through with confessing to America, because that's what it took to make him realize everything. And I love that CANADA WAS THERE THE WHOLE TIME. XD

...For some reason, my favorite line in the whole thing is probably: "…Define 'seeing.'" "That's /exactly/ what I said." It just made me laugh~

My only criticism? A little heavy on the French- I love the usage of language, but it /is/ a little disconcerting to have to scroll to the bottom to figure out what the bloody fuck the bastard is saying (…*ahem* England!mode there, sorry) and then trying to scroll back up to find your place in the story…

But a wonderful fic all the same, and well worth procrastinating my homework (and ignoring the fact that USUK is practically my OTP) to read. XD

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You know, I've read this fanfic over ten times, and I am just now sending a review.

I AM A HORRIBLE REVIEWER. OTL

Anyway...

I really like this one-shot. It's my favorite FrUK one yet. :D You kept them so much in character, and the way you lead them up to the sexy tiems scene was perfect. They were just fighting and then the next second, they were kissing like there's no tomorrow, and everything else after that...good times. :3 It seems like a highly realistic scenario for Hetalia canon if you ask me. xD

But yes, I love this fic. Definitely one of my favorites! :D

Ha ha, I read it constantly over and over, sometimes before I go to bed even soicanhavefrukdreams. XD

/pathetic orz

SO YEAH I REALLY LOVED IT.

I loved this. Your style is very enjoyable, and your characterization is wonderful. Great job!