I love the last three lines

I LOVE THIS STORY! Sorry for enthusiasm but im not exaggurating when I say this is an amazingly well written and well thought out story and i love it to bits 3

should i be happy that Edmund and Alena are getting married or should i be sad that they are dead?

Impeccable story!

Sounds awesome so far! :D

Thx for posting! :)
Well the only thing to notice is that most of the time for the Chronicles of Narnia they all follow the end :) It's bittersweet indeed.
Do keep writing!

Oh. How tragic for them to be reunited that way.

Glad that is over.
Really, Jadis does plague Ed's life a lot.

ROTFL haha they almost had a problem over the star. It was so amusing!

Oh my gosh I love Lucy XD
When she can expect a nephew or niece?!
Bahahahahaha. Even Caspian had a fit of laughter as I did. Wait a minute, I still do
ROTFL

Wow. That was surprising. Yah, they messed up big time with both girls. They'll need to really do something about it besides saying that they're sorry for acting like jerks...

Oh, well Lucy's test already happened. Huh...I wonder on Alena's test.

So they're off to find the rest of the swords.
I wonder if you'll spin sth else as Eustace is around

LOL they actually saw all the practice Eustace had with Reep. How amusing.
Yah, Gael was really cute and all,but Ed would hv a heart attack first **rolls on the floor laughing**

Uhm...well they are gonna have a couple of problems which we already know.
**sighs**Please don't feel as I'm just pointing bad things at you. I've enjoyed reading your other chapters,but this one was so predictable. I hope you don't just insert the third movie and lose the element of surprise :)
Eustace's vocal thoughts on Ed and Alena made laugh though XD