Very nice so far, though I don't think Calipsa is getting enoughth screen time (or whatever the written equilivent is)

now that i think about it if calipsa is so powerful then why couldn't she find Gabriel herself?

your oc seems to be very mary sue .-.

I know you have already written the chapters and maybe you've moved onto I don't know, fishing as a hobby and aren't reading this, or my other reviews, but if you are reading this, as for the peter/caitlin/emma situation, you should have worked in a nice triangle situation, peter as the uber god he is now, can take eli's power, and then become two people and go out with both of them, and always be two people, who have thier own minds (might need an extra power to actually make the clone have an independant mind), seperating his feelings for both girls, so he can make them both happy, and make both of his selfs happy. Now hows that for romance. Damn, I wish I had super powers.

See now what I love about this particular heroes fanfic is the total obsurdity of it, its great. I love the smorgasboard of characters all just basically bumping into each other in a huge state of Choas, I hope the rest of the chapters are as good as the first 17, ill go read them all now :D.

Loving your after chapter comments, :), oh and the story too.

love, kisses

Pamila im Brasil"!

godddddddd, im love Sylar/

Pamila

3 LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

This was SUCH a great chapter, and an even better story. I thank you for letting us read it:D

woah... this was the first fanfiction i ever read on here... (i found this late) i can't believe it's over. awesome story! you had me hooked from the first chapter, i'm going to miss this.

Please post the last chapter! I'm dying from anticipation!

I can't wait for the big fight with Sargon!

I've tried to read this several times, but I never have much of a chance; I have read a handful of later chapter though. I'm going to give you my honest criticisms as I read through, which I hope you can put to good use. Your spelling is very good, which, as a grammar Nazi, I appreciate, but some of your rhetoric seems redundant (example: dorm room door). Also, Calipsa randomly introduced herself to Claire; why couldn't she have randomly introduced herself to Sylar? That, as well as the dream catcher, seem nonsensical and pointless. Also, and maybe you've remedied this in a later chapter that I didn't read yet, but Calipsa is a bit of a Mary Sue. Even with all of this, this is still a fairly compelling read.

Just caught up on all chapters here. ;) I do hope that Claire is wrong and that everyone is saved. I am loving this story. :)