Will you continue?

So it's canon now that Minato was a terrible excuse for a father, a few minutes meeting the echo of his mother is more important than growing up with a father and not being all alone and hated? I really don't like Minato.

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

very good story, I hope you continue, greetings, bye!

A bit different spin on things.
Quite enjoyable.

A third story I'd like you to update when you've got time please.

Temari bon choix car elle est la fille d'un kazekage et Naruto d'un hokage.
C'est bien qu'il ait de la famille autre que le clan uzumaki cest trop répandu.
Il faudrait aussi qu'il se diversifie un peu .

ah man (T-T) I wanted Mikoto-chan to live and be in the harem!

I second the notion of karasu-san
hinata always must be part of a naruto harem.

This chapter is pretty fun :) It's a real shame you're having trouble with writing on Naruto, I always enjoy it when Authors like you write new, often preferable, versions of the series. I hope you'll regain the fun of writing about Naruto soon :)

Nice chapter. I'm sorry to hear you're losing your Naruto muse, especially as it was your Naruto stories that initially brought me to you. It might help to go through and clean up the early chapters of Dokushu, at the very least it will give us something Naruto and honestly even knowing your writing gets better, it's hard for me to try and get through those early chapters.

Good chapter overall, nicely done. *Nods* And good to see you again.

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next

Great chapter, but wanted to see how Sasuke reacted to the slaughter with it not being hidden. Hope to see Naruto cow him.

Excellently done chapter, definitely the best yet.