| Reviews for The Secret Beneath the Ashes |
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   timothy.nguyen.73 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014 Dam this has potential. |
| DayStorm chapter 1 . 7/29/2014 Great few paragraphs. I enjoyed it, anyway. Only one thing . . . you have the potential for a full story here! You have GOT to expand on this. I read the summary and immediately clicked on it so that I could read what was here. I really had been just scrolling, looking for something good and I found one! C'mon. You can't leave it like this! haha Really, though. Good work. Hope you continue with this. |
| gothgirl97 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013 You need to continue this! |
| 7 Ace chapter 1 . 10/27/2010 Really good start. Do you plan on finishing? I could help with ideas if you would like. |
| Janay Leonard chapter 1 . 9/23/2010 What an awsesome and devastating story |
| fun.lover2012 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010 Wow, very nice story! I loved it! Please continue! :) |
