nice and mysterious i liked it

Dude, please continue this, it's really good! I wanna full story! :)

Well that was kinda, sorta, maybe, extremely awesome. It's exactly what I hoped their relationship would turn out to be. Although, I would think that Arthur is a little more observant of their surroundings, especially when talking about a job. But other than that, it was really cute!

Continue writing more fanfics please!

~yume824

i love that this fic is written from fischer's perspective. i need more fischer in my life 3

great job on this. i loved reading a/a from a third party point of view. they seemed sweet

Thats an interesting take, through the the eyes of their mark Fisher. He's the one doing the spying it seems on the architect and point man. YOu story's plot has just begun, I'd like him to actually approach Ariadne and would've like to seen what would have happened. He seems mesmorized by her as well. She did plummet down the depths of limbo and get him back to consciousness. Especially since Arthur and Ariadne decided to take a break from each other hence this new job. Im surprised Arthur couldn't tell that they were being watched or followed or spot Fisher in the crowd. Arthur and Ariadne seem to be wrapped in their own world at times of now.

I blame seeing Inception twice and Arthur and Ariadne fanfictions for my new headache.

But thats besides the point. What I like about this fic is that its in the point of view of Fischer. It links into the reality (or dream?) of the world of "Inception" and doesn't just make it another fic about a random couple, separate from the world they originated from.

Wow, I'm making no sense today! Oh well, either way... loved the fic and I'd love to see more!

Oh, I loved your fic *-*

Poor Fischer, that's true :( But your fic is so lovely, congrats

I'm kind of torn on this story, 'cause I honestly don't think Arthur and Ariadne-especially Arthur-would be careless enough to let Fischer listen and follow them, but at the same time, I like what happened anyway. xD You made it work well, and I'd like to know what happened next. (:

LOVED IT! please write more! :)

Loved it!

keith richards? really? like the rolling stones?

Please continue! More!

Love it! This was written really well. You said you were thinking about making this

into longer story? I definitely think you should :)

WHY? D: HOLY :( But... :(

Yeah. Awesome plotline. Continue it, pretty please? :)

*bubbles and bursts* WHAT IS THE JOB! OH MY GOD, I WANNA KNOW MORE! WHAT HAPPENS! I don't know if you have a plan or not for continuing this, but it intrigues the hell out of me... :)