fellas, press f for this dead fic.

I really loved this

This is really cool

Looks like somebody forgot to add the full stops. Ha

This story was great, but I found it kind of misleading that you tagged it as Greed and Bruce Wayne. I think Lust and Bruce Wayne would have been better, seeing that most of the story focused on her. Either way, great story!

Hey,
Wow...mind if you fix this chapter?

Never mind.

Oh balls, hello Pride.

This makes a painful amount of sense.

It had its problems...quite a few, I might add (Stacy had a lack of purpose, the characters weren't fleshed out as well as they should've been, and it lacks a real conclusion, just to mention some examples). However, I ended up enjoying it. Why? You did some things well. Copper wasn't overplayed, the Riddler was well executed for the most part, and I loved the dynamic between Crane and the homunculi. I wasn't expecting this to be perfect, of course, but it was a nice read. Because, after all, it's fanfiction.

This was an exceedingly awesome story. I kinda half expected it to be another major sucky one that makes no sense, but it was a great portrayal of characters that are hard to pin down. Lust and Envy (Greed is a little easier to me) are kinda twisted characters, but your not sure how twisted or where the twists are. Yet your version seemed believable. Thanks for the story -

Sorry, DemonRailly, but I didn't want it to go on indefintatly. I wanted to wrap it up.

So it ends like this? No epilogue and no sequel?

That's a shame...

D Batman has a love interest again!

Nice work!

Holy ****! This story is incredible!

Moar please!