AWWW! THIS WAS SO SWEET! i really enjoyed this story! Happy writing!

My favorite part was the line about the Chunky Monkey, simply amazing!

cuteeeer

OMG! The perfect amount of tension, just the right hint of humor, and the perfect romance story. Maybe I should try Sora's tactics for asking a girl to the dance.

I really loved your story, it was awesome :D

I'm about to read your other story and i bet it's gonna be as great as this one :)

For a first one, this was great, seriously

~Yumi~

Lol I was playing that song while read ing the whole story! I love it. Beautiful ending very touching. It warms ones soul. Lol

Well done sir, well done.

For some reason i felt listening to Disturbed made this

more awesome... Im weird i know but meh, i dont care

This is great for your first fic C:. It made me laugh and feel happy inside. Haha, Sora hates his cousin XD

One teeny tiny critique, then praise! When you were describing the dress... "dull white color, almost to a brown color but not quite" with the beautiful wine red that perfectly watched her hair. Brown-white and red is a definite yuck. When describing something beautiful, try not to use words like dull. It paints an ugly and worn out picture. The entire time I was reading this, I was envisioning beautiful Kairi in a hideous dress. Maybe you could make the white "sparkling pearl-hued" instead to go with the wine-red. That would be gorgeous. Or even "deep obsidian black". Just had to throw that out there.

Second, where the heck was Sora through the whole dance? Did he get cold feet or something? He should have been there at the start to sweep her off her feet! Idiot. He's lucky he's cute or I think people would hit him. Acutally I laughed outloud when namine was talking about sicing the boys on Kairi's date if he didn't show up and then counted Sora out because he got a fat lip and a black eye. Haha!

I love the characters in this story. The background of Sora and Kairi being childhood friends was spectacular. ANd Namine and Roxas were picture perfect! Love it! Kudos to you and keep up the great work!