This was incredible. I am in love with this story, holy crap.

Wow !
It is twistingly beautiful! It all makes sense somehow , and I love the fact that the last line , that bakura was loyal to the very end ! And wouldn't leave lil Ryou alone ! TT

I'd like to imagine that before Ryou closes his eyes for the last time , bakura would be right next him

This was beautifully written. I feel messed up for liking the storyline, but it just fit them so perfectly, you know? Obviously, you do. :p

This was beautifully written. I feel so messed up for liking the storyline, but it just fit them, you know? Obviously, you do. :P

This was a very interesting concept and very chilling. I loved both characters in this and it was a great read. Very satisfying ending, I felt.

Holy hell, that was pretty fucking...just wow. I mean that as a compliment, of course; I love how this was articulated. It really helped me feel like I was taking the back seat inside little old Ryou's grapefruit. He was pretty philosophical in this, and I loved it!

You said that you used tips from Chuck Palahniuk to write this? Really interesting. I've been meaning to steal one of his books off of my sister's bookshelf; I'll have to do that sometime. But like I said, I REALLY liked this. It was a twist on what normally happens in generic fanfics portraying the Spirit of the Millenium Ring as abusive. Definitely not what I see every day!

Ah, this was a wonderful mess of emotion. Really addictive to read, loved it ~ !

Holy shite

I loved it

It was so fucked up in such a creative way

Loved it , loved it , loved it. You are an amazing writer :) xo

this writing style... is amazing. ive always loved things like this. (is that a bad thing..?)

this story left me speachless and i enjoyed every word. it's so different compaired to reagular ryo/bakura stories.

it makes me want to practice this writing syle. i love books and movies that are in this format, i love the ending, though it's sad, it made perfect sence to me.

I think the reason i like this story so much is the way it's written and how it stands out from most of the others. it made perfect sence to me beginning to end, the middle helped me understand better the whole thing. i love how the format makes you need to infer tthings and gradually fills in the hole. like peices to a puzzle.

I could rant and rant about the quality and greatness of this story for ages. it is one of the stories here that make me want to attempet to try the writing style and inprove my own.

this story was amazingly well written and enjoyable to read. thank so much, your a great writer. :3

3 words to describe this story: Twisted, Sick, Amazing.

I absolutely loved it. It was so well done and captured a different side to both characters. It's also something I've never seen before so that also helps ;D Gets a bit boring reading the same Abusive!Bakura and Abused!Ryou stories.

Definately created a new facet on thier characters for me to think about if I ever do another yu-gi-oh fic XD

10/10! 3

Twisted... but because of that I like it. You succeeded in making different kind of Ryo/Bakura fic and yet made it so that it's realistic... I love the idea of Ryo being the one controlling their relationship. I also can't help thinking that Bakura would have wanted something more with Ryo.

Your writing style is wonderful and fits with the story. It hides things but not enough for the story to be confusing. It reveals but not everything in one moment. That would just make it boring. I enjoy when I get to read between the lines.

I can't really say anything more but I love love love LOVE this. And I would definetly want to see more.

I cried I effing cried ! it was so...so...I can't even explane it ! I can't even say I loved it ...I don't mean that I didn't like i on the contrary but GAH ! I'm confused with myself now so just for that I love it !

That was... Wow. What a perfectly twisted way of life. And I'm kinda jealous of Ryou now, too.

WOW... this really almost made me cry. The ending was so disturbing and hurtful. (Which is what you seemed to be going for... but, still... wow.) I feel so sad for someone who feels like Ryou felt. :'(