I live this, the hopscotch and Kirk with the beans could have come straight out of the show. And who doesn't love a happy ending?!

Yes, great! more?

Ohhh this was so good! Absolutely loved it!

One of my favorite moments in a story is when the emotion is so bittersweet and strongmthat it gives me a literal painin the chest.
"I um, am adjusting." Was one of those moments in this story. I feel both sorry for her and proud of her for recognizing the need and taking action to fix it.

Loved it:)

I still don't know how you do it, but you capture their characters so well. I felt like I was actually watching a Gilmore Girls episode... well, but until the part when they do the nasty.

excellent work. you are a fantastic writer!

This was great! All the way through I laughed. The bit about Kirk was especially good. Dialogue was perfect, exactly what they would say.

Only thing I would say is maybe Lorelai could have called Sookie 'doll' instead of 'babe'.. but that's just be being picky.

LOVED IT!

AWWWWWW. Realistic dialogue...in that it fits the characters well 3 I doubt many people talk like the Gilmores ;P

CUTE.

But maybe put into chapters? LOOOOOOOONG page :C

thank you

Hee. It's so, so, so obvious when Lorelai is jealous. She has such a hard time dealing with everything Luke is doing outside the diner, which isn't (for) her.

I like she let Sookie have her moment. She's a really good friend.

Oh, thanks for the... uhm... inward action this time :D

Hope to hear from you, hon.

wah! this is sooo cute!

Really loved it :)

Awwwww I loved it so much I'm sad it's over

Love love love it! Great job!

I really liked this! I wish there was more! :)