Very poetic style, and an interesting take on Snape. I thought you did a good job showing instead of just telling us about his pain at the end of the First War, and I could visualize his actions very easily. The line "Surely no creator would be so cruel as to subject him to an eternity of Poppy Pomfrey?" also made me laugh out loud.

Nice job!

Really poignant... oh, poor Severus... always tormented *sigh*, regardless of who came into his life. Really well done - thank you!

This is brilliant, I was seeing images of Snape and I could picure the whole scenario. Amazing.

AStitchedUpHeart x

Oh my... so profound and haunting. Excellent job!

Such a gifted quill.

okay, this story officially freaks me out. It depresses me to no end but I suppose that's the point, isn't it?

As such it is very well written, very poetic and harsh at the same time...do you know what I mean?

Anyway, I think I want to kill myself now. or obliviate myself.

But, lovely, if depressing. Thank you for sharing (I won't thank you for ignoring me though ;))