I hope you can update soon I want to know what happens next

This is really good, can't wait for the next chapter!

I am so enjoyin this story and can't wait for more.

wow, i wonder if Edward suspects she has those thoughts...i keeping my fingers crossed that the plan works

Aw it's so good to see Bella happy about something :) Update soon!

Really loved this chapter, great work as always. Will you be doing an EPOV chapter soon. Would love to know what was in his head during Seth and Bella their training to prompt him to go hero:-)

wow

they did it

what can I say?

I loooove this chapter

Bella certainly seems to have got over her distrust for Edward and her dislike for his past.

Oh I was hoping Bella wasn't a virgin:(

"I know you'd probably look good in a skirt, Edward, but I think I might look a little better," I said. "They want girls."

lol

ohhh how happy you made me with the little makeout sesion between bella & edward

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so there will be a battle...can't wait

please don't let anything happen to bella

hugs & kisses

Hey the more the merrier i say :) And i really want to kill "Your grace" and i haven't even met him yet! Update soon!

huh, I'm anxious to see what Lionel has planned.. Great story!

I think it's a trap too... Maybe 'his grace' knows who she is already

Wow, great suspense building. Can't wait what happens next.

Great chapter:) Loved how Leco tries to get her attention too! Can't wait to see this Vampire Lionel!