I absolutely hate your Bella. Damn you did a good job with keeping to her original selfish self from the books. I really do applaud you for being so good at it, but I can’t keep reading because to me there is no way to forgive her or understand her idiocy with her reasons for leaving.

I love this story so much. I doubt there will be anymore update seeming how it was last updated 4 years ago but I followed and favorited it just in case. I can't wait to see what is in store if you do update again. I hope you are feeling better!

Paul Meraz?
I could have sworn his last name was Lahote...

Loved the story and I hope you’re health is better.

Love your story

Love your story

are you going to finish this story or make a sequel ?

What a amazing entertaining story! I couldn't stop reading it. I hope you get this message and you come back to this story and write some more p!ease!

I'm sorry but everything she complained about seems like an excuse to me. She didn't have to go through anything she complained about by herself. She only has herself to blame for having to go through stuff alone. She also has no right to keep the information about her children health from Jacob.

Good chapter but I was hoping for it to be drawn out. I feel as if Jake learned about his daughters too quickly...it would have been better if Jake had taken one look at Bella and just went in the house. That way Bella couldn't use her children as an excuse the first chance she had. She would have had to work much harder for his forgiveness...I feel that he won't be as reluctant to forgive her or as harsh to her due to his desire to see his own children. Although, some people may disagree thinking that he was already harsh with her but I don't think he was harsh enough. What she did undermines the trust that relationships are built on.

Very well written. I'm enjoying your descriptions, however, I hope that Jake doesn't take Bella back...at least not easily. What she did was cruel. Her reasons for coming back seems like the usual...her using others for her own sake. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story pans out.

Loved it.

I hope and pray that you recover fully. Thank you for your writing skills and I hope that you are able to finish this story.

It seems I can't get away from the cullens in JB story. God, I dispise them, their whole nature, being predators, sickens me. they have no heart, no soul, so I can never suspend belief and believe they have the capacity to love or care about anyone or anything but their self interest.

I do like your story, though I skipped certain parts, smut is not for me, but to make them charity cases to the bloodsuckers is a little insulting. I don;t see what is wrong with wolves also having money, a sort of fund set up for them a long tome ago by the council for the wolves who will always be tied to the land.

Bella irritates me here, her loyalty does not seem to be 100% with the wolves. She should put herself in the mens shoes, having to accept any charity from they leeches, their enemy, the things they were born to destroy.

Good story though

I loved this story!