Hahaha this is so good and hilarious! By the way, I don't think this should rated M, i think T rating was enough, because there aren't any explicit sex scene, hehe

Aww, poor Shinichi, if it's not murder it's something else. ;P I really enjoyed this story, because I could totally see this happening. I wish you the very best of luck on your writing!

THE ENDING WAS THE BEST ENDING EVER

LoL! Three buzz kills in one night. Happy anniversary indeed.

Aww poor ran and shin fate has it in 4 them

XD Nice job. So fits them. -

They still fit so well together! Thanks for the fairly romantic scene!

Ja nee!

I had a good laugh. Although I find Ran and Shinichi a bit out of character, your story was fun to read. :)

poor ran and shinichi !

lol poor Ran and Shin-chan! lol blue balls

Well, this was enjoyable/humorous to read! Very well written and great way staying in character! Loveddddd ittt! :D

i enjoyed reading your story. im glad that people are still writing shinran stories, there arent too many of them around anymore. keep up the good work :)