This is really good. You're a good writer

This is a amazing story you write the characters with wonderful emotional depth excellent work Please think about adding more to this I'd love to read and review more

Please update your story please can't wait to see what happens next in the next chapter

I hope you continue this :)

this chapter is beautiful omg how can you leave it on such a cliffhanger are you trying to kill me? argh please write a new chapter soon!

Good to see another chapter. Will there be more this month? :)

I love this story! Please write more chapters!

Wow, this is really heavy stuff. You doing a great job. I hope to see more of this.

You've written this beautifully. This is so edgy and revelant. I fully suggest you continue with this story!

i like this keep it up

It's a brilliant beginning. I hope you eventually come back to it. :)

Wow, that was pretty intense on Cassie's end of things. Nick and Kira's section is really interesting too for its shortness, as it makes me even more curious to know what the hec is going on and why they are running from Cassie and why Kira wanted to kill her.

Interesting start. You didn't give us much, but what you did write leaves us wondering what's going on and why Cassie and Nick separated. Curiosity is a great motivator to keep reading, so I hope you continue this!

I'm interested to see where this story is going; especially in light of the fact that Cassie seems to be playing both sides...

Cassie's a "good" Watcher now? Oooh, I'm excited to find out how that happened. I hope you continue this.