Reviews for Marth's Shopping Trip
Lady Luna chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Ha am I the only one who LOL'd at "That thing could barely stand a din's fire, let alone a falcon punch"
Fireminer chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
Simply funny!
Crizix chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Hey there! I know this story is two years old now (and that you have other, newer fics that I haven't looked at yet), but I'm having a bout of randomness right now. Well anyway...

I like how coherent this is, especially since a lot of things about Smash Bros. in general tend to...not make sense. Now that I think about it, Smash Bros. is comparable to the likes of Adventure Time with Finn and Jake in terms of sheer oddity...Actually, there are a lot of franchises out there that only make sense in context. Huh. I cannot believe I did not notice such things before. Playing video games for my entire life must have done something to my weirdness sensor.

Okay, that's enough rambling for today. Uh, where was I?

You know, I never did like the idea of stuffing a lot of people together into a giant mansion. It always rubbed me as impractical. Yet...for Smash Bros., it actually makes the most sense (although I do think there should be more than one fridge and one TV, haha).

I think Ike is OoC here...not that any non-FE readers would notice. Anyway, I like the jokes; I think your sense of humor is fine. My personal favorite was the part about the potato chips.

Ah, comma splices are everywhere. Reminds me of the early chapters of your Origin of the Prince of Light. Seeing as this is old and Origin of the Prince of Light is longer than the Odyssey (Well, it looks that way, at least), I guess it's okay.

I can't remember the last time I touched an SSB fanfic...So I have nothing to compare this to, quality-wise. I do remember an over-reliance on randomness for humor, though.

Have you ever noticed that CPUs will primarily chase after you if you aren't in the middle of the fight or whatever? I find it really annoying, especially when it'd be so much easier for them to knock each other out instead of going after me like some kind of mob. Sigh.

I know I'm unhelpful, sorry. Well, that's all I've got to say. Thanks for the nice read, and see you around...maybe.
hugacatngetscratched chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Hyrulian idol lmfao XD