Awee, it's so sad that his dream life could never be reality...But nevertheless, you wrote a very sweet dream! I really liked it.

It would have been so much nicer if that'd actually happen. On the other hand, the books never would've gotten so popular or even published if it wasn't for the drama. Us people are horrible, really, we only like to read tales with a happy ending, but which don't start out happy.

Oh well, it was a nice dream.

Oh my God, Ciircee, you broke my heart. I kid you not, I almost burst into tears in the middle of this story. THIS is how Harry's life should have been, would have been if not for the cruelty of destiny and the irony of fate. I wanted to keep going, forever and ever, reading how wonderful and happy his life would be. God, my heart STILL hurts. Wonderful job, C. Words cannot describe.

that was sweet. i'm glad that you included peter.

The only explanation for that ending is that you were high while writing it, and therefore may not be held accountable. So, I will take it upon myself to fix it for you.

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“Mum? Why do you always ask if Dad's invited Ginny Weasley?" His mother just grinned and flounced on ahead, leaving James to roll his eyes.

"Told you so," he said smugly. Harry grinned, and then suddenly heard a faint pounding noise. He groaned. "What's wrong, Harry?" His father asked, looking concerned.

"Aunt Petunia," Harry explained. "Almost the end of the dream."

His father raised his eyebrows. "Not the Dursley nightmare again?" He queried, putting both hands on his son's shoulders. "I thought I told you not to worry about that, son."

Harry smiled. "I know, Dad. Sometimes it just feels so real."

His dad smiles sadly. "But it's not, Harry. It's just a dream."

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And then, in the author's not, you explain that REALLY the Dursley's was the dream and everything else was real. You see?

aw.

what a WONDERFUL story. damn. really really good. awe-inspiring, actually. completely tear-jurking, because it's never going to be real.

damn foul wormtail.

*sigh*

off to read some of your other stuff now!

Aw, poor Harry . . . sadfulness. I wonder what he was about to ask her? What WAS he about to aske her? Hm. I love the story, though, it's sad. And it's cool, because nothing about them, essentially, changed.

Thanx,

Meghan

lovely, it was all rosy and then you had to go and make it so...melancholy...

that was very, very good. nice the way you didn't make the little *explainaions* of what things were different stick out, but rather blended them in.

continue writing!

wicherwill

I want Harry's life to be like this!

Of course, that would make for a very short book now, wouldn't it?

Fleur

This is like...a happier version of Harry's life. I wish my dreams were this clear! It's really great.

Great fic! I loved the way you portrayed all the characters, and the talk about Ginny at the end!

That was rather haunting and depressing. Even though the mood of the fic was overall very happy, it has that kind of sad feeling that connects it to a million 'if only's. If only they hadn't died; if only Voldemort had never existed... Superbly written, and haunting. Bravo.

so sweet.. so beautiful.. so saaaaaaaaad T_T I think I'm gonna cry... that's not fair! poor Harry T_T

great fic, so lovely, so cute Y_Y

Sam-chan

Great! The first HP fic I've read in a while, but still it was awesome! I love how you portray Lily and James and how you undo all the wrongs that have been done to Harry and his family, especially with Peter being nice! I loved it! I wish that you'd write more like it...