| Reviews for A Delicate Line |
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celajwhitney chapter 2 . 5/5 edward is such a selfish little prick! |
NUCGIRL72 chapter 28 . 1/19 You suck |
celajwhitney chapter 13 . 10/27/2019 scary m.f.! i think victoria , alice and edward are going to be dead soon, maybe carlisle too. |
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htray chapter 28 . 9/24/2019 Well i'm a bit surprise by the ending and i would have not chose it for one of my fics but i'm not about to insult you about it like i have read others do. That's kind of stupid ! It is a very bold move to end it this way and i respect that. Your story your rules. Thank you for sharing and for your time writing, it was thrilling to read. |
eeveejacob chapter 8 . 8/7/2019 OMG I'M LAUGHING SO SO MUCH THAT IT HURTS! LOL Loving the plot tho |
akshutalankar chapter 28 . 2/17/2019 Hold on... Bella died... What the hell .. after everything she died ... |
Blistful2006 chapter 28 . 2/11/2019 This story was awesome and I honestly loved the darker Bella here and who doesn't love a Jasper that walk the line between his two halves himself Just hated the ending but it was still worth the read. |
CountryBaby93 chapter 28 . 1/28/2019 Great story! But not even playing with that ending though! Like that straight up just pissed me the fuck off! But it’s not a bad thing though cause that’s the type of emotions I want a story to bring out in me! So good job! |
twizt312 chapter 1 . 11/19/2018 Good story but WTH with the ending |
Guest chapter 28 . 10/30/2018 Fucking shitty end to decent story. I had been happy to realize that you had finished the story, but it was a fucking waste of time. |
Guest chapter 28 . 10/30/2018 Horrible ending. I can't believe you dragged it out so long for this bullshit. |
CoSmO333 chapter 28 . 7/26/2018 Such a beautiful end to this story tugged alot of feelings from me thank you for sharing! |
Shellbean chapter 7 . 6/26/2018 Hey there darkNnerdy, This chapter had me laughing so hard that it produced tears. Just AWESOME! Shellbean:)) |
suziq968 chapter 7 . 11/23/2017 Every bad name pun, peter and Wal-Mart at the same time. Thanks for the giggles. |