Of all the DinoTrap interfaces I've read, this one is the best! Hands down! I didn't cringe or skip any parts, not even once! You kept them in character and didn't use botcocks. My favorite part is where Dinobot tries to pull an Ali Baba and be all "Open sesame" on Rattrap's chassis and RT replies with "Get slagged!" xD

Very in character for such a cracky premis. Nice job! It's very enjoyable.

Wow.

I am *impressed*. And I mean that sincerely, because I was very skeptical when I read the summary. Unfortunately, there's a lot of "HURPALURR X GETS INFECTED WITH AN APHRODEESIK SO HIM AND Y HAVE GOTTA DO BUTTS" stories out there - you can't imagine my delight at seeing the concept done well, for once. It was believable, down to the technical details, hot without being rapey, and tender without being overly romantic.

Excellent work.

:D

I believe that this story is absolutely entertainingly excellent, and you get a grade A plus for your esteemed, grand efforts.

I am not being sarcastic, and neither am I lying

I am lacking in the term called sleep, as it seems to evade me, and when I am tired, i get strangely wordy and articulate...

as much as that surprises me

Still, this is an excellent story... I wonder if there'll be more of its like pertaining to those two.

Regards,

AnimeDreama, as it were

I was a little leery of the "something made them do it" thing when I read the summery, but I'm really glad I didn't let that stop me.

I loved this story and can't wait to read more from you with these guys!

I very nearly did make an embarrassing noise at the end of all this.

AndI'mverysorry, I'mverybadatreviews, but seriously, there's so little here that I didn't like. In fact, first time around, I don't even /have/ anything I can bring up. I'llhavetoreaditagain. Andmaybeoncemoreafterthat.

Just that I completely adore this. I adore the vocabulary you've used, I adore the very believable "Beast Wars" slang and terminology, and I adore you. Like burning.

And I must say, the line that struck me most (as absolutely brilliant) was this: "It was a concession; an acknowledgment that something had shifted between them and a promise to examine it later."

God, I love you. Just putting that out there.

Well, I haven't read a Beast Wars related fic in years, and as for the reason I wanted to check out the selection today is far from my own understanding. However, I can't believe how beautifully written this was! I really enjoyed the experience, so thank you very much. :) You definitely have a talent!

YEY~! Slashy porn with fluff! X3

OTP

will they want it or not, these two are OTP 3

Okay. I admit it. You made me fall in love with this pairing... Uh, now I need to go have a shower. A very cold shower...

But first...Cake for you!

Please write more juicy stuff like this! -Aura of Cute-

oh my god, I absolutely loved that! Cliche or not, I totally enjoyed that. My DB/RT fangirl side has been momentarily sated. Awesome job. I can't wait to see what other stories you come out with in the future.

Signing out

-LAXgirl

very good :)