| Reviews for Never Be A Memory:Remake |
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Night Shadow76 chapter 2 . 4/27/2019 This is awesome, a little work on the execution, but the idea and potential has me hooked. |
Ntraveler chapter 2 . 3/24/2016 The prologue is good but I would like to see how the rest of the story shall go |
Hikari Nova chapter 2 . 1/7/2016 please work on your grammar as you left out words and used the wrong spelling for some of your words you meant |
Eaglezaruma chapter 2 . 12/18/2015 I definitely like it so far, but you spelled defeat wrong near the beginning. |
plums chapter 2 . 12/15/2015 Nope, not interested. Straight to wave... Where all good fan fics go to die. |
plums chapter 1 . 12/15/2015 Good start... Just so long as you don't bring him back to Konoha and send him on wave missions, etc. |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/15/2015 Severe grammar issues all over the place. Did you even use spell check? Perhaps read what you wrote maybe? If so...you need a few more lessons in the English language. Otherwise the plot (what I could make out anyway) wasn't too bad. At least for a start. I hope the grammar is improved in later chapters. That I'm about to read. |
Dragon0905 chapter 7 . 12/15/2015 Okay. Finished reading this story. Other than making Naruto basically a god incarnate. You decided that he wasn't enough to take on madara. And had kami bring in not one but two more alternates. Not sure which versions are supposedly coming but it seems like overkill. A team of 4 narutos. Even if one of them is the canon Naruto that may I mention beat madara. The others are WAY OVERKILL. now had you not made him beat kakashi asuma and kurenai simultaneously with no effort whatsoever kind of power levels but gave him the ability to use the orbs as you called them. And had him use the swords even invisible as well as each seemingly having a seperate personality. And still just understandings the basics of his powers would have made this story better. Or just outright have Naruto declare from the beginning that he was a god and then trample everything as you've done here but don't go trying to make him pretend to be some stupid genin. You made him a 'swordsman master' as you put it then are getting him trained in the ways of the sword but not by a swordmaster. Just by someone who is above average. Didn't even try to get any trading from zabuza. A swordman of the seven swordsmen of the mist each a master of the blade. You made him run away in fear of narutos skill like a pansy. Too many contradictions. |
midnightgamin chapter 3 . 3/6/2015 Dammit, I stopped reading. My eyes started bleeding trying to understand the sentences. |
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Enemy dumbass, it's spelled enemy. Don't know why people like you insist on writing when your english isn't worth shit. |
nemikconi new sora chapter 8 . 3/12/2014 KILLING INTENT RISSING! JUST UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER! |
Shattering chapter 1 . 3/7/2014 ? Hmm, how to put it... it is very plain story. When I read it, it's like I'm eating raw oat flakes, which tastes like nothing. |
Rellek Dragonheart chapter 3 . 2/12/2014 Please i beg you on the heads of the fanfiction gods, re-edit this its a good story but your spelling leaves much to be desired and grammar as well. no i am not flaming its called constructive criticism. thank you a fellow author |
nemikconi new sora chapter 7 . 1/31/2014 when will you update chapter 4 |
Dage chapter 3 . 1/24/2014 Dear gods the terrible grammar makes me want to kill myself sorry if that was red but it's true plus only getting haku's name wrong most of the time |