I have to see how this ends. o_o

ohhhh I want to know more please, is the next chapter soon, I just want to know more so what happens please.

This is pretty awsome!

Wow! This story is amazing! This chapter is even better than the first one XD Keep it up, can't wait to find out what happens next!

damn, not only is this amazingly descriptive but very believable! the changes work wonders within the overall story.

Woohoo! Yami Yugi's played for a fool!

How interesting! I really like the way you explained the Bakura duality (er..tri-ality?) Especially with the thief pre-Zorc also being the "light". I've always been sort of in the "Ryou is the reincarnation of the thief king" camp, if only because at least it gives TKB a happier canon ending than just darkness and oblivion and failed revenge. And your writing style is excellent, very descriptive while still allowing the plot to move along. I really want to see how this turns out! *fingers crossed for happy ending*.

... This was recommended to me. And I am so glad it was. Just to understand how taken I was by the twist at the end, I had a mental list of the occasional typo that I was going to let you know about in order to fix it, but I've completely forgotten it.

So yes, I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter. :D And even if this doesn't continue, it's still good enough to go to my favourites ~

I believe this calls for a sequel that's what!

And a happy ending! And more explanations!

What a cliff hanger! Unfortunatly for me..

Because I really enjoyed this story

And the way you wrote it. I love the complexity

Of it and how it makes you think.

Please update it D:

i love how you're working this, writing out Bakura's memories as a game for Ryou. i'm definitely curious where this is going.

*snickers* Zorc manipulating Atem was brilliant!

It's a very interesting idea. I like how Ryou, the thief king, the spirit and Zorc are all connected. You need to watch your grammar though, there were a few awkward sentences in there that spoiled the flow of the story. Hope to see more soon.

This is amazing! Everyone's very much in character and I've always been curious as to what Ryo would feel if he ever saw the truth behind the spirit's origins.

I can't wait for part two!