ehhh did Saito wear hakamas? o.o but dayum, amazing story. shipping Okita x Saito so hard 3

NOOOOO! Bitch hell no that's not the end! Do not tell me your done! Getchaw ass back here now!

that was a great story you should write more make them hot like you made this one ok you know what I mean but put the word reader in so people could be in the stories with their fav hakouki guys ok

I felt so sad at the end of the story... TT but the parts where they were together was so good and the way Saitou submitted to Okita ahhh it was so cute! :3

Soo beautifull. Pitty that Souji must die. He and Saito are like my most favourite anime characters ever. I loved this. Its one of the best hakuoki fics in here. :)

Sweet...but sad D: Okita-San!:(

Oh god its so beautiful and sad ;n; I love it, and I love these two. CRIES. Great job! They are beautifully in character!

T_T That was a nice story *silently cries in corner*...there needs to be more fanfiction for Hakuouki in the Shinsengumi including Okita and Saitou

I loved it! It was so romantic yet very, very sad :"( I'm still crying over the ending.

*sniff* touching ending... I feel so sorry for Souji.

wahh I love the end it's so cute!

Thx for writing. It's always nice to see yaoi with Okita on (or anywhere).

-crying too hard to write a proper review-

Aww~this is so touching and sad!

I really enjoyed it! Both your storyline and your writing skills! I love Hajime! And Okita! But then again, shall I say I love every character in Hakuouki?:D Excuse me, I'm a bit high here~~~

Love, Crystal

Its so sweet yet so melancholic Q_Q

Written so well too

Most people just write it for the whole pairing aspect but this one seems more like a story.. and I can really find it's place in the original

Nice one :D