After reading beauty in our mistakes, I wanted to read some of your other inception stories. I loved the beginning moments of her coming in, and the t-shirt. Seemed very Arthur. I think, if we are going from the end of inception to this story, it is probably too soon to say i love you. especially with Arthur's past of being hurt/abandoned by women in the past. Hence- its a total dream. Arthur is going to have to help her break her addiction before she becomes Mal ;) But, great story- i hope you do a sequel for this one-it could be really cool

It's kind of depressing to think that it's all a dream...so it's real. Haha. One thing. This sentence, "But, thankfully, after the 2nd knock, his head perked up and he walked to the door." Never use numbers like that. Always use the word second, or whatever. Also, I'd suggest this: "However, after the second knock he noticed the sound and lifted his head before standing and approaching the door." Or something like that. I just didn't like the thankfully in there. I can be pretty picky though, so it's just a suggestion.

GAH! [head explodes]

okay, soooo...to get all mind-gamey, i think it would make a lot of sense if Ariadne was dreaming, cos she finally found a way to dream without suffering and she's happy and whatnot.

ON THE OTHER HAND! i really really REALLY want to believe that she WASN'T dreaming, cos i think it's kind of sad that she could only be with Arthur in her dreams, and i want them to be together in real life! xD

SO, i will just say that this is a WONDERFUL little fic, and i fave'd it because it is amazing and sweet and i love it. _

thanks for messing with my head, now i won't be able to sleep. D:

but yes. very cute. ]

i hope you write more, you're very good, and i'd like to read more from you! 3

I like to think that it was not a dream, just cause to ME it's better that way. Just like the movie )

And I loved it! They were a little ooc at some parts but hey it's your story! I still loved it and can't wait to read more of your fics!

It was a dream! That's my opinion. I think. It couldn't have gone so smoothly otherwise... O_o

That was great. Loved the ending :)

Great one-shot!

Aww this was so cute! I love them as a couple :3

great job!

cute! But I noticed this little thing:

"Her lips were hungry for hers."

Loves ya!

Boo

Well, this was basically amazing. Thank you for being such a great writer and for feeding my addiction! (:

great pleasure indeed! hahaha, thanks for posting this! good read:D

I kind of like the idea of her dreaming all along, but then I guess it ruins the sweetness in a way. I enjoyed it all the same but will be pondering the statement for quite a while. Great work!