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fragolitaferro chapter 1 . 2/2/2016 Excelente fic! :) |
yaba chapter 1 . 11/26/2012 This was truly lovely. Great writing :) |
ItsNatalie chapter 1 . 7/30/2012 Great! |
imperfectandchaotic chapter 1 . 3/5/2011 Lovely. I can totally picture it; you capture them so well. Annie |
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 2/3/2011 Ahh so good! I like these snapshots of their lives. Nice job! |
Kansas42 chapter 1 . 9/14/2010 I love this. I know I've written similar comments in other reviews for your stories, but your command of language is so precise and so elegant. I really enjoy reading your prose. It's so lyrical, and it works so well for the Inception universe (which I feel madly in love with, too, particularly Arthur, of course.) There are a number of lines that work extremely well, but I think this one's my favorite: "His smile isn't as hard earned as she thought when she first met him but his laughter is a quiet sound, like he's reluctant to let it go." Anytime you feel like writing more Ariadne/Arthur, you will have a very grateful, happy fan in me : ) |
dyk3adellic chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 Oh gosh, I love this. It had brought a few tears to my eyes. Beautifully written and executed. Great job. |
Mackep chapter 1 . 8/20/2010 Liiiiike. |
eucalyptus chapter 1 . 8/18/2010 Beautifully done. |
lilahri chapter 1 . 8/12/2010 This was great! I LOVED it! I think you did a fantastic job of keeping the two of them in character and making the situation and their relationship very believable. Great job! ~lilah |
cosmogyre chapter 1 . 8/10/2010 This is just lovely. So many amazing descriptions, and they are all right on target... I love this picture of them. I love that she doesn't let the dreaming or Arthur take over her life, and I love that he knows it. I love stories from Ariadne's POV, too, so this hit all the right spots for me. :) |
Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 8/8/2010 That...was really sad. *cries* Your writings is great though! :) |
WorriesAreForSquares chapter 1 . 8/8/2010 This was very very well written. I think you really represented a beleivable relationship between the two. Good Job! |
Firefly's Rebirth chapter 1 . 8/7/2010 The sense of longing is acute for me in this story. Gorgeous. Write more? Cheers! |
penvision chapter 1 . 8/7/2010 i loved this. um, that's not much of a review, but i'm very tired. ok, i love the overall theme, the loose timeline, the bittersweet romance, the way you write both characters. i hope you write more inception fics for me and everyone else, especially since i can't seem to find the time right now (sad face). definitely loved the plot/theme. |