Saiki Kampatsu? Hyaku Ren Jitoku? Did these Techniques came from Prince of Tennis or what...?

PLEASE FIX THIS! ITS TOO CONFUSING AND HARD CRACKING

Always remember to use soup in the shower

Continue plz? I love this fanfic really really much TTvTT

I'm not trying to offend or critize you but I think you should edit your stories better. I like what I'm reading and I think your idea is a good one but if you don't edit your story then people won't understand it well and have to spend more time trying to figure out what's going on. This will either make them think that the story isn't good or simply give up cause it takes more effort to try and make sense of it. I hope you're not offended.

You need better grammer

O-kaayyyyyyyyy. You seriously need a beta. Seriously. Like, you MAJORLY need a beta. No offense, but the plots good, and the grammer is, well, terrible. You mixed up past and present pretty badly. I know it's hard, but proof read your sentences when you're done. You have a lot of run on sentences that are supposed to have a comma or period. In the " " you're supposed to have a period at the end -or a question mark, if it's a question of course- and you're supposed to Capitalize(?)ALL of your sentences, even in the " ". You also left off a lot of suffixes. So, anyway, thanks and like I said, it's be in your story's best interest to look for a beta. Peace!

Please please, proof read or get a beta. Please.

keep the hard work up and keep on adding a few more chapters i cant wait to see the end

Man i love this story can you please update it

Continue! :))

Your story is interesting but you can't really jump from idea to idea like that. Your sentences are quite bland and your grammar is...unique. You did a good job though. Do your best!

PLEASE UPDTATE THIS STORY

I can't make heads or tails of this story. But it has a YOUTHFUL story line. Maybe a good idea to get a beta.

Good job and good luck for next chapter