This was lovely! I love the character study on Arthur. He is so enigmatic, but your portrayal makes sense! Great job :)

Yana

Oh dear, that was just terrific! I love how you tells the story to Arthur's side and it was just amazing.

This story is so incredibly beautiful. What an intricate background you wrote for Arthur. The ending is absolutely perfect. Please continue writing A/A!

I love your verion of Arthur's background. And I'm glad that he didn't let his fear of loss stop him from going back to Ariadne.

Thanks for posting. This was lovely.

-Ellie

I really love this fic, you brought a different point of view of Arthur and that was very good, you know from the very begining.

That's one of my favorites!

Really loved, good job D

ive never read a story with arthur portrayed in such a vulnerab;e light, it was breathtaking. it was beautiful! :)

Whoa~

I really love the backstory you created for Arthur. And why he is the way he is in the movie

I love the pacing... going from the past to joining the team to Mal's suicide and then to Ariadne. You've got Arthur's voice down pat. And when he decides to leave, it's so sad but it makes sense with his line of thinking.

So well-written! Really loved it.

mysong

This was so sweet. Good job on the story. Inception fics are always excellent and this one is no exception

Absolutely amazing. :D

Keep up the great work

That was completely amazing. Your description, your knowledge of every character's background, EVERYTHING, was captivatingly wonderful. Your imagination was so fantastic. It is SO easy to see this happening. Everything just seemed to fit. Truly fantastic job.

Also, I saw that you mentioned the Cobol job. That made me smile.

Aw I love the story about arthur and his background

Beautifully written m'dear. Could have better breaks for jumps in time, but otherwise, I was completely taken in. Write more. Cheers!

I absolutely adored your one-shot. Great job!

beautiful story!

awww... this was so sad! but i loved it, it managed to be sweet too. jeeze, Cobb needs to learn to tone it down the first time, some day someone had to have come out of the dream swinging...