Great story. I actually hope if hiro mashima write something like this.

Amazing

I loooooove it! it was just what I was looking for! it's everything I wanted it to be! good job!
thank you for sharing this lovely story with us!

That was great!

Best. Nalu. Fanfic. Ever. ️️️️️️

This is the best story I've ever read!keep up the good work

Love love loveeee the ending great work keeping going with what u love (4 times wow)

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that was awesome

The ending was sappy but over all very very heartwarming and you should now my stone cold heart like never ever cries and I was ballen over natsu and how well you described his thoughts, actions, and emotions. All and all this is the best nalu fanfic I ever read. You should feel proud because 1 it was truely wonderful and you cept me on my toes and 2 this is the longest revue I've ever done congrats you and your story won my heart and I look foreword to more truly heartwarming stories later on in life.

Hi!
I just wanted to say that I loved it! And I hope I get to read more that you've created!

I actually might cry. Your a great writer, by far and this was a great story. This was also a very depressing one!

Are you KIDDING me, this is the best ending ever. I love how you expressed the character's felling's through their eyes. Some famous authors do not even do that. I LOVED IT. THANK YOU.

This was effecting my emotions to much! I am still love the story so far! I already imagined Natsu crying and Lucy laying there and the wound and just wahhh,but seriously thought it's a great plot line keep at it

Good job man, this is some good fanfiction. And completed one too.