I am so reading on. As soon as I saw the first few sentences I knew that you were a good writer. If you've been on fanfiction enough, you can tell.

Awesome

Nice!

The characters are spot on :D I'm really enjoying this!

This was amazing! I read the entire thing in one go, and I absolutely loved it. It was not OOC at all, and I love your characterisation of the TARDIS.

Why, oh why, does this not have more reviews?! You are such an amazing author! You capture each personality perfectly! I could go on about the plot for AGES! FANTASTIC story! :)

Love it! Very well written, good suspense, and you kept the original charectors personalities very well! Great storyline too!
Great job (again)!

hey there! i really enjoyed this story, it kept me up an hour past when i was supposed to go to bed last night, and it's so good i'm staying up tonight too to write a review for it! i really loved the concept, and how you delved into the TARDIS's and the Doctor's relationship. i loved your descriptions and flow of the characters' dialog, and how they were so in-character. however, i'd like to give you two suggestions on how, in my opinion, to write smoother! (you really don't have to follow up on it, it's just a suggestion of mine.)
The breaks between perspective.
telling your readers when the perspective flips isn't very necessary, once you start typing up a new scene, we'll catch on. if you really want a break, you can separate the scenes with a line like other authors, but blatantly putting it out there interrupts the reader's train of thought and breaks it up. the line (or nothing!) will help the story look and feel smoother.
Too much detail on little things.
spending a paragraph on how a girl's skirt disturbs the air particles around her is getting a bit deep. i admire your dedication to describing detail- and in that respect, i strive to be like you- but taking every other paragraph to describe something will make the reader focus on the tiny details instead of the big picture. it makes the whole thing a bit choppy. instead of wasting energy on the small stuff, describe surroundings! i'll take your description of the city as an example. it was wonderful! small afterthoughts here and there reminding the reader of the atmosphere after the big description without going off on a tangent. use that everywhere, but not all the time! because even though you did it for the city, i had no idea what the interrogation room- or even the entire neutron's headquarters- looked like until the later chapters.
sorry for so much text, or if this is a bit late! but before i go, let me say that was one of THE BEST endings for a story i have EVER heard. It kept me smiling for a while after! Thank you so much for writing this!

awesome story

awesome characterization

awesome plot

awesome, awesome and pure awesomeness!

This is definitely going into my favs!

Oh wow, finally I came across a good one, i hope. *Wink, wink*

Just messing with ya.

Love the chapter and you really adapted to the characters.

Don't worry, I don't see the TARDIS as just a machine lol.

-Asphodel

"Their madman, their Doctor."

Awww.

Very much enjoyed this story. Thank you!

The actual love for this fic right now... :) 3 oh my god though, in chapter 10, I almost died when Rory didn't know... :'(

This is a really good story! There aren't a lot of stories with the 11th Doctor, so I really like this one

This story is amazing! I love it, and read it all in one go (which, considering my attention span while I'm surfing the internet is a great compliment). You got the Docors personality perfect, and your portrayal of his realtionship with the TARDIS was brilliant. I especially loved the sections from the TARDIS' point of view.