| Reviews for On the Line |
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   Tropicallight chapter 1 . 7/14/2019 Ooh it was great! |
| samfindingneverland chapter 1 . 7/11/2019 Hands down, this is the best fic I have ever read involving RoyRiza. You are SO witty... your writing is impeccable, so mesmerizing. And you write them SO right, so in character, gosh! I've read many stories involving drunkness and these two; never in my life would I have thought I'd end up finding something quite this authentic! I'm so glad I did. I might never stop fangirling about you and your fics, but that's a fate I'll be willing to accept. |
| IarIz chapter 1 . 1/11/2019 so. rebecca got our thx since ahe kind of made the together. |
| IarIz chapter 1 . 1/11/2019 so. rebecca got our thx since ahe kind of made the together. |
| DyslexicTrashWriter chapter 1 . 6/8/2018 Wow, this is like so good? My friend sent this to me to get me into FMA and damnnnnnnnn, does the show hold up to this fic? Cause the blend of absolute humor ( i'm in love with the line about the two cars and deciding which one to drive, i was laughing so loud) and the historic pining and communication and miscommunication between these two, so amazing. I'm off to read your other stuff cause i'm hooked |
| Louis1 chapter 1 . 1/11/2018 Oh for God's sake this is just perfect... ohhh. You're a ready talented writer. Funny and emotional and sexy. I can't find enough words now to describe why this story is just perfect but it is. Thanks sooo much for writing it! Aaah.. *faints* |
| DS chapter 1 . 9/12/2017 Absolutely incredible. You were able to capture their characters perfectly, and I honestly wouldn't be surprised if this was cannon. |
| Shijaeger chapter 1 . 8/7/2017 This was fucking amazing! |
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 6/3/2017 i half expected this to end tragicly, with a roken and drunk roy calling after maes' death |
| Elise chapter 1 . 5/19/2017 Okay this was BRILLIANT and I didn't expect it to end this way, DAMN. I loved the part where Havoc takes the phone away from Roy that was hilarious x) Also loved the fact that the situation changes, that they actually evolve in their relationship (which is something very frustrating for Royai fics). This was so well written and, unbelievably, still in character. Thanks for sharing! :) |
| intercostalspace chapter 1 . 11/21/2016 3 it. |
| jealous21 chapter 1 . 7/18/2016 excellent! the fifth time gave me chills,it was so awesome:) |
| caspasta chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 I love this. :) |
| dapangtaoz chapter 1 . 4/28/2016 OMG this piece is just so adorable! My heartbeat actually sped up when some sentences hit me... May I translate it into Chinese (with link and reference of course)? It would be lovely to let more ppl enjoy the story~ |
| karithelight chapter 1 . 4/23/2016 very well written |
