Adding to my previous review.
Kaito knows Lucia is a mermaid, but he doesn't know that she's that mermaid
Your argument is invalid

Me confused. Does Kaito know Lucia's a mermaid or not?

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Awesome history! Are you going to continue it?

interesting

LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE!

I Love It Soooo Much I Watch Mermaid Melody

Hey judging by when this was last updated I was wondering if you planned on continuing this story? I really like how you have the plot going so far, and would really like to see a continuation of it. PM me please!

i love it

Please, please, please, update soon I am getting sick of waiting? It has been a year. I know you have a lot of stories and it is hard to juggle them all. But, please, send a little love this way and update. I love this story and eagerly await an update. Please, do not let this story become a forgotten story. Those are so mean.

great story so far! cant wait to see how the story turns out! :)

Please update this story soon! I love it! I've just finished watching the anime and I was looking for a good fanfic to read. This is great! I love the story line. I would have never thought to make Luchia "related" to Rihito and Mikaru. Fantastic!

Wow is all I can say.

That last chapter came in nicely.

Okay. About this story.

It's a nice one. Not too melodramatic.

The plot still okay but you'll have to work on your storyline. It's not very organized.

Work on the scenes. Which should come first and how to bring the scene in.

If you master that, you'll be great.

Your language is alright. I'm not complaining. You didn't add any bad words. So you're still okay with language.

Although you can add a little more descriptions and phrases and how the words come out from the dialogue.

Oh! And your characters. Although I don't quite like Mikaru but the least you could do was make her a little less of a slut that she is right now. Always clinging to Kaito and all and stop a little of her bad character like what happened when she found out Luchia had fainted. She wasn't the bit worry of her own sister. Instead, she had accused her. This isn't something that would happen to between sisters.

Reread before you post. You have some grammar mistakes or I could assume that some of them were typing errors. I could point out every one of them for you but currently my sister is in need of the computer so I'll just stop right here.

Anyways, keep it up. It's been months after the last update. Don't stop.

Loving the fic… I don't like that hanon and rina hate kaito but oh well plz update soon

hi, i really like your story how lucia lived with rihito and mikaru. i really like the story plot and i can't wait until you update the next chapter soon.