Muy buena historia, me gusto la narrativa; aunque hubo varios errores supongo que lo tradujiste con un traductor.
gracias por compartirla

I just read this. So glad I found it. It is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

For some reason this story popped into my head last night and so I spent more time than I'm comfortable admitting trying to find it again. I read it quite a while ago and couldn't remember the title or author. It was when I had just begun reading Twilight fanfiction for the first time, and before I had started religiously logging in and reviewing. I just remembered how much I had enjoyed it, even though it had made me cry a tiny bit. And I enjoyed it just as much the second time around. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

Just rereading this and it is still as beautiful as I remembered. Thank you for taking us through the transformation from Edward’s viewpoint. Lovely job.

This is fantastic! A great story! ;)

I just found this story and it was just so well written and made me a little upset because I wanted more. Thank you for this wonderful story

This needed a tissue warning. I almost bawled my eyes out.

Read this based on Fran's recommendation. So glad I did. Brought tears to my eyes that were so worth it.

Oh, wow! Just goes to show you don't know anyone until you've followed them around for hours on end LOL! But, seriously, I'm glad Bella found true love and another family to love and be loved...sucks to be all alone!

Sweet, sweet, sweet
I loved every word

I have read this oneshot so many times throughout the years, but it never fails to make me cry. As I read through it, I cry because you can feel how much Edward really cares for her. She sacrifices so much, and i guess I read with tears of joy because I’m just so happy someone can take care of Bella now. Thank you for writing this oneshot. This is one of the fanfics that just felt so right. It gives me such butterflies.

A beautiful, sweet story. Thank you!

This is so lovely! I really like this characters!

just like that bellas in love with him? seems ...entirely too fast but whatever. its not like he treated her like complete SHIT for MONTHS when they first met or anything

Such a sweet dtory. Tears flowing from my eyes too ad they admitted their feelings and seeing how Bella changed Edward life for the better. Very happy that Charlie was able to give his blessing. He is one of my favorite Charlies. Thank you for this story.