WOW, short but brilliant and Interesting and very intelligently written... this is good and as perfect as it gets. fantastically wonderfully beautifully written... I so much want more and more and more... never did any fic do this to me this quickly... you evil teasing genius... :-D

Haha, that was really good!

Oh, the opportunities missed! Don't we all wish we could get them back? Good story and Thank you for it.

Excellent little story, there's not enough unrequited Johnlock!

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Good story. Interesting.

Oh, poor Sherlock. I would be disgusted with that, too. I can hardly imagine putting it in place that your best friend may be -is- a "sexual creature." I can hardly manage the thought that comes in that my best friend might actually get crushes. It's just - no. It, no - it can't. I just - errggg. It's not a nice thought. Poor Sherlock. I would not be surprised if he is scarred for life.

Nice. :) I like that Sherlock isn't overtly sexual in this one, mentally speaking. It's more true to the character.

quite a funny story ****

Lol...poor Sherlock having his schedule thrown off like that...

THANKS:"D

So I have to tell you that this is the most amazing thing that I have ever read. I am trying so hard not to laugh out loud because my roommate is sleeping. But God! Do I want to. :D

I loved Sherlock's analytical view on John taking a shower up until the very end when he realized what John was actually doing in the shower. Then stuff got real and I had to clap my hand to my mouth to stop from laughing.

I adored this story and tomorrow, I fully intend to stalk your FF profile to (hopefully) find more Sherlock fics! 3 And I mean stalk in a totally uncreepy way.

GAK.

That was the sound of me choking on awesome. It still tastes nothing like cake, damnit!

-Meg

Loved it. Very realistic and a good ending :)

Oh I bet you do Sherlock

naughty boy that sherlock

If I'm honest, the last 3 lines weren't really necessary for me to have enjoyed this a lot.

As one of the other reviewers already mentioned, John's an ex-soldier, and unlikely to care if anyone overhears him 'working off his frustrations' in the shower. And we know he's had difficulty settling back into civvy-street, so very possibly he isn't that different to Sherlock, not really caring if anyone else is uncomfortable with what he's doing.

Sherlock's auditory analysis of John's showering ritual, and the change to it, was really well written, and gave an extra layer to what would otherwise have been a nice domestic situation fic. Nice work!