| Reviews for Family Binds |
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Hikary Sanoko chapter 4 . 12/21/2015 I love all these little moments, they're so cute! I hope you update this! |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 4 . 10/4/2013 KYYAAAAAAAAAA...! XD THIS IS KUROGANE CENTRIC! YAAAAAYYY...! All is about Kuro-Daddy! - Love all chapters! REALLY LOOOVVVEEEE ALL CHAPTERS! KYAAAAAA! - Love this speech by Kuro-Daddy: "My Being will be for you… but my soul belongs to the four- no I guess five- that I have underneath my protection." SOUL! HIS SOUL BELONGS TO HIS FAMILY! YAAAYYY! XDDD SOUL! YATTA! HE WILL NEVER LEAVE THEM! YAAAAYY! - Please Continue...! D'X |
Wolf Dragon Demon chapter 4 . 2/24/2011 Where did Sakura go? Ok, that asked this fic is cool I like it and hope you continue it. |
LightDarkandChaos chapter 4 . 8/19/2010 Very cute! I love the family dynamic you have. Le gasp! Kurogane admitted he's the dad? Has hell frozen over? ... Probably. Great story, please continue! |
Iscy chapter 4 . 8/19/2010 I...LOVE you for this! I just read all four, and they're so cute, and...Gah! I just LOVE it! *happy squeal* |
Reidluver chapter 4 . 8/19/2010 Heh-I love it! I just love images of them sleeping together, just like a family. You did a great job. |
Reidluver chapter 2 . 8/19/2010 Awww, how cute! :) I really liked this one. And it's nice to see that Fai is using his magic. Using a sleeping spell was hilarious. Oh, and when did he get stabbed by Tomoyo? I seem to not recall that. |
Reidluver chapter 1 . 8/19/2010 :) How sweet! I like the image of them all sleeping together. I think you forgot about what Mokona was doing though, at the end. |
Uakari chapter 4 . 8/19/2010 GAH! I am such a sap; your family snuggleness always manages to make me squee. I've always thought Tomoyo would send him back out with the others as well... Another great chapter :-D Some of your language was a bit awkward in here - probably just some stuff you missed in editing, but "...of a sort." This would probably be better off as "sort of" - "of a sort" makes it sound like Kurogane IS X instead of DID X. "slicing a thin cut an attempting to peek ninja." - I'm not actually sure what you're going for here...'slicing a thin cut to reveal a staring ninja?' or 'slicing a thin cut through which a ninja attempted to peek?" (Sorry to nitpick, but I really enjoy your stuff and want to help :-D ) |
just-O chapter 4 . 8/19/2010 Great chapter! Loved Fai's reaction to when Kurogane admitted to being the father of the group. I literally laughed out loud, once again proving to my family that I am indeed a little crazy. Keep it up! Can't wait til another chapter. . |
Jeantron chapter 4 . 8/19/2010 woohoo for tied down kurogane~! |
just-O chapter 3 . 8/12/2010 Loved the idea for the chapter. Personally not a yaoi fan so I don't like KuroFai but I do like your story so I'll keep reading and skip over any parts in the future that might get "romantic." My bias aside, I still love that you have a different idea for each chapter. It keeps me interested and I'll be looking forward to the next update from you. Please keep it up! |
just-O chapter 2 . 8/9/2010 Both of them are very cute. Absolutely in love with your story! Please keep it up! _ |
Uakari chapter 2 . 8/8/2010 I love the way you have them interacting in this chapter...it feels so natural - you have a good sense of how to write them perfectly in character and still be hysterical. And the tea-drugging was just icing on the cake XD |
Jeantron chapter 2 . 8/8/2010 bawww but fai actually really does have a sexy/adorkable signing voice1 *and VA~! DAISUKE NAMIKAWA/NORTH ITALYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY* PASTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA |