At first, I thought it was going a bit creepy, and then, I realized that the story showed how their relationship grew and they both recognized that growth. Sweet ending.

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Very sweet:) and I think you captured Ron about perfectly.

Really sweet and funny!

Aww... that was funny and sweet!

This is brilliant

really really sweet!

I really loved this little chunk of their lives. It's wonderful written and you seem to have a fantastic grasp of Ron's character! it's really refreshing to see someone who doesn't try to simply his complexity by explaining it. I'd love to see more stories along these lines, maybe the first time Hermione smelled Ron's hair :D

So well written. I was laughing so hard through the first part, I cried. Really enjoyed it!

it was sweet. i liked it!

Keep up the great work xx

aww i really love this, it's so sweet XD

You've got a clear, concise narrative voice. Lol. How many times have you typed the word 'underwear' in this story? Probably more than any other story of similar length.

This was really entertaining. Spot on! Excellent job!

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Really beautiful tale :)

The first part was hilarious... and the last part truly endearing.

Id really like to know what he felt the first time he saw, hold, and touched her underwear on Hermione...