Thank you for the sweet short story. Hope you have a nice day.

LOVE IT!

THIS STORY IS SO GOOD!

I loved it! Good job!

Awsomesouse Of epic proportions. You should totally write a sequel to this. I love atem as a wizard. And how you used the original yugioh showd games _

Cute!

Hey, great story. You really have a gift mate, SERIOUSLY!

Loved every minute of it, it was captivating and so well created, I loved Atem's character, he seemed very true and I liked the kind of "wise beyond his years" atmosphere he had about him, essential to a wizard I feel any you have captured that beautifully.

The ending in this one was brilliant, so simple but it allowed for possibilities to grow and completely resolved, gah I've got to stop raving about this.

Seriously excellent fic

Keep up the good work

- Phoenix

That was wonderfully amazing!

loved it!

What a cute oneshot. :) It's very well written, and I love the storyline.

Yami is hilarious, and you wrote the role of 'scary wizard' very creatively.

You did a great job with it!

~YukinoKara

Hey, Pie! You did a great job on this story, I really enjoyed it! I've got the concept for your story, so hopefully it will be done soon (within the month?). It will probably be long for a oneshot, fyi.

Very cute story please make a second chaper!

:3

That was a really clever way to introduce Atem and Yugi. The storyline was very imaginative and interesting. Good job! .

I read this story again because it is sooooo awesome! It was awesome on Da and it is awesome on here. A sequel please! and i'm still gonna draw fanart of this. hmmmm... what scene to draw?

Whooo! This is awesome!

Great story. Are you going to do a sequal? What happens to the others? Do the other get over their fear of Atemu? Would Anzu try and take Atemu from Yuugi once she got over her fear?

What about Honda, does he have a crush on someone? What about Ryou? Wouldn't he find someone other than Anzu?