“I’m ready to go to bed, then, if you are.” Sasuke moves fast as hell lmao. My SasuIno heart is back.

I honestly was a little teary eyed from this chapter. Suigetsu’s death did not sit well with me mostly because Shingetsu (whom I adore) and Karin being alone. Their little family is the cutest and I wish you had the whole damn story made about them!

This is not a good writing even try doing sasuke a little nice I hope what I’m saying

I'm about to reach through this screen and stab Naruto if he keeps saying "y'know." Repetitive verbal tics aren't cute or endearing; they're annoying as hell.

And what happened to Ino? Sasuke is essentially emotionally abusing their son, and she basically got told "mind your own business, woman, and make me my dinner." The Ino I know would have cracked that wok over the head of anyone who tried to talk to her like that.

What the fucking bullshit is this ! Shit crap potty poop does not a story make.

that is neither what a typical feminist utopia nor what a typical sword and socery type of story look like (sorcesses do get to do stuff, princess occasionally do, and not all women are one of those two categories)

Everyone is so out of character it's saddening and upsetting. You got Naruto acting like a complete dummy, people threatening him in his own office. Sasuke treating his kids like shit after what happened with his own childhood and Konoha taking orders from the freaking enemy aka Karin. She's telling Sasuke what to do and he's actually listening. This story is trash.

Love this story! This is so sweet amazing. I only wish Sakura/Hinata/Andou were also mentioned. :)

Also all ten of them were together! This is so beautiful

Okay,I am happy everyone's healing, but Sasuke tried to kill Inou? No wonder Inou is suspicious of has treated Inou horribly all his life, tried to kill him, then didn't meet him for 2 years after Inou saved his life.

Nadeshiko is a saint and she must be protected at all costs.

Okay,I really enjoy this story and I admire the amount of effort you have put into this.

But, I just want to reiterate - Sasuke almost killed his son. Things like that can't be forgiven, no matter how much he's changed. I want everyone to be happy, but his abusive behavior towards Nadeshiko and Inou can't just be swept under the rug like this.

just rereading and i know Ooda is a dear, but here he is deliberately written to trip some alarms? it is so sad that he reminds Karin of Orochimaru sometimes. Ooda might even know. poor boy

man you talk about nothing for all the time

I recently found this fanfiction and from the first chapter was caught with the plot and especially with the characters. I must say that you have a lot of talent writing this kind of stories, as it is one of the best I have read, I love how you developed the personalities of Sasuke and each of their children.
As the reading progressed I could not help but feel more excited and much less could not stop reading, it became an addiction this story for me. Besides that I must say that of all the characters in the original story of Naruto, Sasuke is the one I least like and still does not like but here miraculously managed to come to love this clear character that that was to depart from his claim as a good person. There could not be a better ending, I loved it. sorry for my bad English

Read this absolutely wonderful fanfic over 3yrs ago and I still can't forget it. Anytime I go about looking for a good fanfic to read I hope that I find one even half as good as this one was. This was and still is the only fanfic I've read that got me so emotional that I actually cried. With the significant amount of OCs you created, one would expect their character development to be less than acceptable at best but you defied all odds and constructed a magnificent story. With these skills you possess you should be getting paid to write by now. I've paid to read novels not half as breathtaking as this fanfic. I just hope you're out there making a living by writing. You were made for it. 5 years of reading fanfics and I know just truly what an amazing novel this is. I'll never forget this fanfic, it was an amazing experience. Goodbye justplainrii

it has an interesting plot, and i think that this could really be something, but the only problem i have with it is that my affection for canon!sasuke is unable to overcome my complete an utter disgust for your sasuke, who also happens to be the main character, and i do not think that i will be able to read four short books worth of sasuke abusing his children.