It's been a long time. please update.

Nice

I originally found this on media miner and was so happy when I looked you up on here and found more chapters! Please continue!

Nice chapter. I wonder if Vegeta is going to just tell Goku or hide it a little longer. I bet he's just going to tell him.

This is short how dare you but still a good chapter

[Lobo and Wolf are watching TV in rec room]

Red:[walks in looking pissed] Damn it!
Wolf: What is it now, Red?
Red: This fic is outta chapters, and I actually like it.
Wolf: [look of mocking surprise] Wow, the Queen of Bitches actually admits to liking something.
Red: Like you can talk, princess.
Wolf: She-devil.
Red: Cold turkey.
Wolf: Satan incarnate.
Red: Buzz kill.
Lobo: Whoa, whoa; first off, Wolf, stop provoking her, second, Red, what do you like about this fic so much?
Red:... Well, I like all VegetaxGoku and GohanxPiccolo fics. Also the lemons didn't suck...completely. Also, there just enough OOC-ness to make Vegeta seem cuter, but still be Vegeta instead of some teenaged girl OC.
Lobo: Ok... Wow, didn't know you had it in you to say something that wasn't completely bitchy.
Red: Thanks [snarky]. And I didn't know you were so stupid as to say I'm not a bitch when we both know I am.
Lobo:[sweat drops] Uh, Red? What are you doing with that axe?
Red: Reminding you why even the Kai's wet themselves when I'm pissed off.
Lobo: Eeep! [runs away screaming]
Red: Come back you sissy, take it like a man!

[Runs after him with the axe, Wolfy pops into existence]

Wolf: *gasp* WOLFY! How many times have I told you not to Instant Transmission in front of me!
Wolfy: Oops, sorry Sis.
Wolf: Well what is it?
Wolfy: Red left before I could tell her what sucked about that fic she's talking about.
Wolf: Really what sucks?
Wolfy: Well for one, it doesn't show how Gohan tells Piccolo his feelings or how Piccolo reacts. Serious bummer. Also, Vegeta is always bottom, why can't he top once in awhile?
Wolf: Huh.
Wolfy: Yeah, Red is seriously delusional if she thinks this fic is cool.

[Red walks in, axe missing]

Red: Who's delusional now, dog?
Wolfy: AHH, RED?! Where's Lobo?
Red: Oh don't worry, he's just thinking about the error of his ways [smirks all evil-Vegeta-like]. And what's this about MY fic sucking hmm?
Wolfy: Ahahaha...ha...ummm... Bye!

[Flys off at max speed]

Red: [pulls out her twin guns] GET BACK HERE, DOG!

[Flys after him]

Wolfy:... Great, Lobo's probably dead somewhere and my idiot brother pissed off the strongest girl in the Universe.*sigh* I'll have to use the Dragon Balls to revive them...AGAIN!
I suggest you, the author, get more chappies up before Red blows a fuse for you taking too long.

[Hops on motorcycle to chase Red and Wolfy, speeds off]

Plz continue

Very good story. I hope you can continue this.

I hope there's a fucking sequel... I NEED MOAR CUTENESS!
Fluttershy: Yes.

3 I fully support Vegeta x Goku!

Just came back to tell you this is my 50th favorited story. Keep up the good work :)

My favorite thing about this story? Bulma.
I don't like her in canon, and despise Bulma-x-Vegeta. However, in this story, I actually like her. You wrote her character in a way that she was funny yet supportive and somehow managed to please me.
A fic!

Lol, Trix and Chinese...is that YOUR favorite food?

Houeeee!

The writing...is a bit rocky, I admit. But it is an admirable plot, and I like that. Keep on going; I can't wait to see where this will go.