Okay yay, I can read the second chapter now. Brilliant, I have to say. When I read, I don't really notice grammar/spelling issues unless they're super, SUPER obvious. Y'know, like, inyourfaceBAM! terrible. So, I think you're good with that part. The only bit I have to say is that Libby seemed to be a bit too old for her actual age - her lines were a bit too complicated and knowledgeable to be realistic. Other than that, I can't really think of anything. This is definitely the best romantic/comedic PercyxAnnabeth fic that I've read here. ]

The site is coming up with a weird error thing for your second chapter (it's happening for a buncha other stories for me, I have noo clue why...), but I thought that I'd just review what I've read so far anyway. I LOVE THIS! Yeah, Percy's a bit OOC, but I think it totally works. ]

aw... no wonder percy was late:D

D: too bad its only a 2 shot): but i think it'll be awesome anyway!

there's only one word that can describe it, which is WOW

i'm not even sure it can be used as an adjective, but hey, its what my reaction is;D

wait i'm crapping.

i was practically in stiches just now when i read the part about hitting the groin part;D its just so hilarious!

don't ask me why, because i can't explain it O:

oh and QUESTION! :D *raises hand and waves like crazy*

why did Mrs O'Leary go the wrong direction? O:

sorry if it was like very obvious in the story..

my brains aren't really working. *looks sheepish*

anyway, its a GREAT job done, can't wait for PART II!

oh and here's the cookies. *hands this GIGANTIC bag of cookies over, freshly baked from the oven*

and the hug! *HUG*

HAHA this is a long review..

but i don't think it helped much.

good job! can't wait for the next part(;

well i didnt see any errors and to tell u the truth im not close to bing on of those people that tease or make fun of or even fix grammer probles but hey u wrote an awsome story and i hope people enjoy it as much as i did ) oh ya and gl in part 2 )

p.s cant w8 to read it ))

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My keysmashing is probably no help to you, but oh well.

Oh my gosh, it's Libby! Like, the story and the girl itself! I love her!

So, when I was reading this, these noises came from upstars and I was freaking outbecause it was either my neighbour doing contruction, or a hellhound. yup. cool story right?

Anyways, I loved this, I think Percy was fine, and can't wait till part 2!